Saturday, July 10, 2010

~Unconditional Love Chp.10~

~We went under the San francisco Golden gate Bridge, Ron started laughing and pushed Jared in, I smiled, "Hahahaha!" I yelled. Jared smriked and pulled me in, The Cold water rushed on me, "Ack!! It's Free-zzingg!" I yelled, My teeth clattered, Jared wrapped his arms around me, "Better?" He asked. "Damn, Your Warm..." I said. We got on the Boat and Went to Shore, "Hey Jared, me and Your brothers are going to go boating for a few..K?" Jared's Mom asked. He nodded, They all got on and left. "Wow..That was Pretty Fun.." I said. "Yeah, Hey Let's Explore the Shore.." Jared said. I got up and ran, "Beat You to the Cave!!!" I yelled. It felt Good, Running, Wind in my Hair, Jared soon caught up, "hahaha, I'm Going to Win!" He yelled. He sprinted fast towards the Cave Opening,I sprinted after Him, "Your Such a Cheater! Using Your Super-Natural Powers!!" I yelled, as I caught up to Him and stopped at the Cave, "Hahaha, Its My Inner Wolf" he said, Chuckling at His Joke. I punched Him on His shoulder, "hahahaha Not Funny." I said, sternly. "What's This Cave called?" I asked. "Yofos Cave, All The Shape-Shifters gathered here, and Told Legends.." he said. "You Know..This is the Place, My Dad told my Mom, he Loves Her.." Jared said. "Wow..This Place Must Be Special Then...." I said, softly. We sat down in the Rocks,"Hey..Uhh..Bree...You should Know the Truth.." Jared said, nervously. "What? What Truth?" I asked. He took a while to answer.."I'm in Love with You Bree..." He said. It shocked me, "Ja-Jared? This isnt a Joke, Ron told You to Say?? Hahaha Very Funny.. Cut it Out!" I yelled. "No..It isnt a Joke..I'm in Love with You, Bree Evans.." He said, sternly, coming closer to my Face. He pressed his lips aganist mine, I felt so dizzy and the world seem to stop, I let Go and Got Up, "I know Your In Love with me too.." Jared said. "No! I-I thought We were Friends! No I am Not!!" I yelled, Tears streaming down, "I know You are, You Just Dont Know it yet.." Jared said, calmly. I slapped Him and Ran out of the Cave, I ran towards the Shore, I hit my Hurt Arm On a Rock, But I didnt care, I screamed in Pain and started Crying...Something Grabbed My Face, "Ahh!" I yelled, "Shhh!" A Voice whispered, I was pulled from My Hiding Place, then everything went Black~
~End of Chp.10! Hope You Like it!:) Srry if Suckish! COMMENT!!~

3 comments:

  1. It wasnt suckish! Good chapter. :-)
    -Hannah

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  2. no...its kewl.im writing another chap.
    -Kylie

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  3. wow i could understand how she thought tht thhey were just friends then i think tht was richard who grabbed her

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