Sunday, July 4, 2010

~Unconditional Love Chp.2~

~"Bree, The Route, That You Take Home is Close for the Day.. Need to Call your Sister?" Mrs. Hernadez Asked. "No Thanks, I'll go the Short-Cut.." I said. She nodded in approval, "Be Careful Bree! See You tomorrow" She called. I sighed, Man.. I hafta go the Forest Way... I walked into the Forest, "I hope any nightlings don't live here.." I said to myself. WHOOSH! Something ran right pass me, I started to panick and Ran as Fast as I could, But something following me, Suddenly I was knocked down hard on the ground, "Ow!! Ouch!!" I screamed. My Arm burned with pain. Then the Creature, Grabbed My arm, and Crushed it Hard, "Ouch!! Ahhhh!!!" I yelled. The Creature smiled and started to hurt my other arm, but something pushed it out of the way. A Reddish-Brownish Wolf, Knocked the nightling out of the way, Killing It, Then The Wolf, Shift-Shaped into a Human, A Young Boy, A Shape-Shifter... I thought. The Guy looked at me, "Hey? You Ok?" He asked. I nodded, then everything started to get blurry and I felt so light-headed, Then Everything went Black~
~"What's Wrong with Her?" A voice asked. "Jared? Did You Scare Her to Death?" Another Voice asked. "Shes Pretty Hot, Did You Knock Her Out while You fighting the Nightling?" Another one said. "Alrighty, All Of You Leave! Leave The Poor Girl Alone" A Kind Voice said. I opened my eyes, "Wha? Where Am I?" I asked. "You're safe, I drained all the Nightling Blood, Your Arm is Just Swollen for a Couple of Days.." The Young Woman said. She Left, The Same Guy who saved me, Sat Near Me, "Thanks.. For Saving Me.." I said. He smiled, "No Problem, Besides, Havent Killed a Nightling for days.. I'm Jared." He said. "Bree" I said," Your House is Pretty Big" I spoke again. "Yeah, I have a Lot of Cousins, So They come here, Now and Then" He said. I started getting up and started walking, "Well, Thanks Again" I said with a smile, Jared smiled back and waved. Then I went Home.~
~End Of Chp. 2! Srry if Short! :(~
~Kiki

4 comments:

  1. they're not shape shifters! they're werewolves!

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  2. haha camen!:P
    Like it...even though it has Jacob.
    sounds a lot like him though.....
    -Kylie

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  3. wow i like it!!!!!!i like how the point of view changes in stuff that is really good love it keep it up

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