~I woke up the next morning and dressed in a simple floral dress and white tights, I tieed my hair into a High Ponytail and Walked out to Bambi, Ever, and Catalina. "Ok We're going to ask the counsler.." Bambi said, her green eyes, shimmering in the sunlight. We walked over to the Counsiler's Offiice, "Yes Girls? Arent You Girls should be heading to Class?" He asked. "We are asking for your permission for Us to Travel to Los Angeles Today." Ever said, calmly. "No. You girls should go tomorrow, Its Family Visit Days, Your family memebers will be traveling here to visit you.." He said. "But!" Catalina cried, "No Buts, get to Class." Bambi looked at the Counsler, sternly. Her Green Eyes, Blank. "On Second Thought Girls! You can go today!!" He cried. Catalina,Ever, and Bambi jumped for joy, "Thanks!!" They all cried, They grabbed my hand and we ran out, "Bambi?? What Happened there??" I yelled. Bambi smriked, "He changed his mind thats all." She said, speeding off to the freeway. "LA HERE WE COOOOMMMEEE!!!" Ever yelled. I rolled my eyes..I'm surrounded by Shopping Maniacs..... ~
~We soon arrived at the Big Los Angeles City, "Ok Where too??" Bambi yelled. I looked around, This City is HUGEE!! Catalina grabbed my hand, racing towards the Gucci Bags Shop. I simply bought a Fine White, Colorful Bag and Waited outside. Soon we traveled to the Macy's Departments Store, Catalina and Bambi made me, Buy a Light Pink Dress for The Dance. I sighed and bought the dress, They're all nice but I'm missing Cynthia more than ever..My thoughts were always about Jared....~
~End of Chp.14 COOOMMMEEENNNTT!! (:~
x----Read My Story! Post Your Best Opinion about it! It Helps!! Team Jacob all the Way! :) I'm Hopeing my Saga will get to Be Published!! xoxoxoKiki----x
Saturday, August 14, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.13~
~"Are You really Going Back??" Jared exclaimed. I nodded and closed my suitcase. Jared took my hand, "Bree..Don't be to hard on yourself... You have a Week to cope with this Loss.." He said, softly. I grabbed his hand, "It will take my mind off things." I said, silently. He nodded and grabbed me close, "I Love You.." and Hugged me tight, aganist his Warm Chest. "Love You too." I said, grabbing my bag and walking out the door, "Write to me." He said, sadly. I nodded, choking back tears, I stepped into my car and drove back to the freeway towards Southern California..~
~I arrived a few hours later, I stepped out and walked silently to my dorm. When I arrived, Catalina was in front of the door, as if she was waiting for me. "I'm so Sorry Bree.." She said, Hugging me tight. Ever smiled, weakly, I turned and saw another girl, She had Short, Cropped Bob-Like Hair, Her Eyes, Green like Emeralds, She smiled, "I'm Bambi... I'm new here, I'm Ever's Younger Sister." I nodded, "Bree." She smiled, "I'm Sorry for what happened.." I was shocked, How did they know all this? I let go of Catalina, "Lina? Ever? Bambi? How did you know?" I asked. "I Re-" Catalina started, Bambi looked at her sternly, "You, Wha? Lina?" She asked, sternly. "Counsler told us.." Ever said, jumping in. I sighed, and set my bags down next to my bed, "We should have a GIRLS NIGHT!" Bambi cried, Catalina and Ever jumped for Joy, "Yes! It will totally take your mind off of things!!!" Ever yelled, her Brown eyes wide with excitement. "How??" I asked, totally bewildered. "We're going to Los Angeles! Tomorrow! We'll ask the Counsler! Oh! The Southern Dance is Coming soon! DRESSES!!!" Catalina exclaimed. "Tomorrow, Bree, We're heading to Los Angeles to Shop!!! Ok?!!!" Bambi asked. "Uhh..k?" I said. They all squealed, "SLEEP EARLY!!!" Ever exclaimed. They all jumped to their beds and fell asleep, I rolled my eyes, "You guys are werridd.." I muttered to myself and fell asleep.~
~End of Chp.13 Thanks for reading!! Chp.14 is NEEXXT!! COOMMMEENNTT!!(:~
~I arrived a few hours later, I stepped out and walked silently to my dorm. When I arrived, Catalina was in front of the door, as if she was waiting for me. "I'm so Sorry Bree.." She said, Hugging me tight. Ever smiled, weakly, I turned and saw another girl, She had Short, Cropped Bob-Like Hair, Her Eyes, Green like Emeralds, She smiled, "I'm Bambi... I'm new here, I'm Ever's Younger Sister." I nodded, "Bree." She smiled, "I'm Sorry for what happened.." I was shocked, How did they know all this? I let go of Catalina, "Lina? Ever? Bambi? How did you know?" I asked. "I Re-" Catalina started, Bambi looked at her sternly, "You, Wha? Lina?" She asked, sternly. "Counsler told us.." Ever said, jumping in. I sighed, and set my bags down next to my bed, "We should have a GIRLS NIGHT!" Bambi cried, Catalina and Ever jumped for Joy, "Yes! It will totally take your mind off of things!!!" Ever yelled, her Brown eyes wide with excitement. "How??" I asked, totally bewildered. "We're going to Los Angeles! Tomorrow! We'll ask the Counsler! Oh! The Southern Dance is Coming soon! DRESSES!!!" Catalina exclaimed. "Tomorrow, Bree, We're heading to Los Angeles to Shop!!! Ok?!!!" Bambi asked. "Uhh..k?" I said. They all squealed, "SLEEP EARLY!!!" Ever exclaimed. They all jumped to their beds and fell asleep, I rolled my eyes, "You guys are werridd.." I muttered to myself and fell asleep.~
~End of Chp.13 Thanks for reading!! Chp.14 is NEEXXT!! COOMMMEENNTT!!(:~
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.12~
~Jared drove me to his house in complete silence.. I walked to the guest room, and layed on the bed, silently. "Knock Knock." Jared called. I answered the door, Wiping my Tears.. "Are You Ok? We got some food.." He asked. I shook my head and fell back on my bed. Jared sighed and closed the door. I closed my eyes and fell asleep.~
~Cynthia's Funeral was two days later.. It was a silent funeral, Just Me and Jared's Family. Jared and his Family drove back to leave me so peace with Cynthia. I kneeled down and wiped my tears, "Cyn...You finally get to be with Mom and Dad...and Jane...Lucky...Miss You a Ton..." I said softly. I got up and drove back home.~
~I'm SOO Sorry for Such a Suckish and Short Chapter! I'm in a RUSSH! Sorry!!! Enjoy!~
~Cynthia's Funeral was two days later.. It was a silent funeral, Just Me and Jared's Family. Jared and his Family drove back to leave me so peace with Cynthia. I kneeled down and wiped my tears, "Cyn...You finally get to be with Mom and Dad...and Jane...Lucky...Miss You a Ton..." I said softly. I got up and drove back home.~
~I'm SOO Sorry for Such a Suckish and Short Chapter! I'm in a RUSSH! Sorry!!! Enjoy!~
Sunday, August 8, 2010
~Please View my New Blog!!~
~Hey Everyone its Kathleen! :) Please Check out my new blog, accordingtobubz.blogspot, Its a blog about random things, tips and MOREE!! Please Come become a Follower and Read my Posts!!! I'll still be on this one though! Don't worry! Please type accordingtobubz.blogspot! Or Look at my Blog list and Click According to Bubz! Thanks a Buncha! Please Visit!!~
Saturday, August 7, 2010
~Twilight Sun Profile Pics~
~I'm really borred, So I'm going to post some pics of the characters... Top from Bottom, Bree, Jared, Catalina ,and Ever, Hope You like it, xxx
Kathleen~
~Twilight Sun Chp.11~
~NOTE: Finally! Ha! I get to finally write a chapter!! :) I added more songs to my playlist, Got 50 Songs in all, Hahahhaa, :) Ok Time for the Chp! :D~
Bree's P.O.V
~Jared drove me to the hospital, In silence, I walked towards the Hospital Office. "Cynthia Evans Please.." I pleaded, my voice, cracking. The Nurse looked at me, "Rm. 200" She said. I took off, banging on the elevator door, "Please Please!!!!" Jared's Warm hand touched my shoulder, "Its Ok..." He whsipered. I let go and sighed and walked to the elevator door. We finally arrived at the Hospital Door, I slowly grabbed the door knob, trembling, I opened the door. Cynthia smiled as she saw me, "Hey Bree.." She said, weakly. I smiled and wiped my face, "How are you Cyn?" I asked. She grimaced, "Doctors said I wont be making a fast recovery..." Tears fell on my face.."C-C-C-Cynthia dont leave me..." I stammmered. "I'm sorry Bree...If I do..I'll always be with You...." I cried on her arm, soaking her bed sheet..Jared watched with no expression.. then I fell asleep besides Cynthia.~
~"Bree!!! Bree!!!" Jared cried, shaking me violently. "BEEEEPPP! BEEEEPPP!! BEEEEPPPP!!!" A noise rang. My eyelids fluttered opened, "What jared?!!" I asked. He pointed to Cynthia's Heartbeat monitor, It was going down..and down... "Nurse!! Jared get the Nurse or Doctor!!!" I yelled. Jared ran out, I shook Cynthia, "Cyn!! Wake Up!! Don't leave me!!!!!" I yelled. Jared rushed in with the Doctors, Jared grabbed me and held me tight aganist him as we watched the doctors try to revieve Cynthia...The heart monitor kept beeping, Tears kept spilling from my eyes. I looked at the Heart Monitor, Her heartbeat went to 0......The doctors looked at me and sighed, "I'm sorry." They said and walked out. Jared held me tight, and stroked my back..as I cried into my arms..Cynthia..my Only Family..Is Gone.....~
~End of Chp.11 I' m sorry for such a long wait!!! Pic is Bree~
Bree's P.O.V
~Jared drove me to the hospital, In silence, I walked towards the Hospital Office. "Cynthia Evans Please.." I pleaded, my voice, cracking. The Nurse looked at me, "Rm. 200" She said. I took off, banging on the elevator door, "Please Please!!!!" Jared's Warm hand touched my shoulder, "Its Ok..." He whsipered. I let go and sighed and walked to the elevator door. We finally arrived at the Hospital Door, I slowly grabbed the door knob, trembling, I opened the door. Cynthia smiled as she saw me, "Hey Bree.." She said, weakly. I smiled and wiped my face, "How are you Cyn?" I asked. She grimaced, "Doctors said I wont be making a fast recovery..." Tears fell on my face.."C-C-C-Cynthia dont leave me..." I stammmered. "I'm sorry Bree...If I do..I'll always be with You...." I cried on her arm, soaking her bed sheet..Jared watched with no expression.. then I fell asleep besides Cynthia.~
~"Bree!!! Bree!!!" Jared cried, shaking me violently. "BEEEEPPP! BEEEEPPP!! BEEEEPPPP!!!" A noise rang. My eyelids fluttered opened, "What jared?!!" I asked. He pointed to Cynthia's Heartbeat monitor, It was going down..and down... "Nurse!! Jared get the Nurse or Doctor!!!" I yelled. Jared ran out, I shook Cynthia, "Cyn!! Wake Up!! Don't leave me!!!!!" I yelled. Jared rushed in with the Doctors, Jared grabbed me and held me tight aganist him as we watched the doctors try to revieve Cynthia...The heart monitor kept beeping, Tears kept spilling from my eyes. I looked at the Heart Monitor, Her heartbeat went to 0......The doctors looked at me and sighed, "I'm sorry." They said and walked out. Jared held me tight, and stroked my back..as I cried into my arms..Cynthia..my Only Family..Is Gone.....~
~End of Chp.11 I' m sorry for such a long wait!!! Pic is Bree~
Monday, August 2, 2010
~Clearing Things Up about The Whole Twilight Saga, Harry Potter Series, and Immortals Series Arguement~
~This is Nothing to do with my Blogs! And I was busy watching Immortals Series, The Tv Spot for the Books, And Many People Have been Comparing Harry Potter to Twilight, And I'm getting Sick and Tired about this Ruckus! Ok First Things First, Harry Potter and Twilight.~
~I've not a HUGE Fan of Harry Potter, I've only Read the Last Book, J.K Rowling is a Pretty Good Writer, And I really prefer to watch the Movies. :D Twilight Saga, I've read all the books and Seen all the Movies, I'm pretty Much, a Die HARD Twi-Fan. :) People have been Comparing These Series! First of All, Harry Potter is for the Younger Kids to the Pre-Teens! Twilight is for The Teens and Adults! Really HUGE Difference! Besides People have been saying Trash about Miss Meyers, Please Stop! Stephenie Meyers is an Extrodinary Author! Please Stop Saying Trash about this Author! :( Ok With The Movies, I honestly I like both Movie Series! Harry Potter is Pretty Good, Same with Twilight! People have been saying Twilight is made only in One Year or Two, While it Takes Harry Potter about 5 Years or So. Reason Why? Harry Potter has Castles, Wizardry! They have to work extra Hard on Those Films! Because Harry Potter Has Some Much Fantasy!!! They have to Make it Good! Twilight, on the Other Line, Is made on a Very Low Budget.. It only takes them shorter, Cuz I guess Twilight Doesnt Have all these Fantasy Work, Do we See Castles in Twilight??!! No! We Don't! So Please Stop Comparing Twilight to Harry Potter! Thank You!~
~Next Thing, Alyson Noel's Immortals Series! I've just finished Dark Flame, the 4th book in the Series, I really Love these Series, And it Really Sounds alike with Twilight. I Love both Series, But Alyson Noel's Series are for Teens and Young Adults while Twilight is for Teens to Adults! But I'm wondering if The 1st Book, Evermore, Is Similar to Twilight. But its True, It seems very similar. But I love both Seriees!! :) Ok I'm finished with my Whole Rant Thing! Thanks For Reading! Cyah Soon! :)~
With Love-Kathleen :D
~I've not a HUGE Fan of Harry Potter, I've only Read the Last Book, J.K Rowling is a Pretty Good Writer, And I really prefer to watch the Movies. :D Twilight Saga, I've read all the books and Seen all the Movies, I'm pretty Much, a Die HARD Twi-Fan. :) People have been Comparing These Series! First of All, Harry Potter is for the Younger Kids to the Pre-Teens! Twilight is for The Teens and Adults! Really HUGE Difference! Besides People have been saying Trash about Miss Meyers, Please Stop! Stephenie Meyers is an Extrodinary Author! Please Stop Saying Trash about this Author! :( Ok With The Movies, I honestly I like both Movie Series! Harry Potter is Pretty Good, Same with Twilight! People have been saying Twilight is made only in One Year or Two, While it Takes Harry Potter about 5 Years or So. Reason Why? Harry Potter has Castles, Wizardry! They have to work extra Hard on Those Films! Because Harry Potter Has Some Much Fantasy!!! They have to Make it Good! Twilight, on the Other Line, Is made on a Very Low Budget.. It only takes them shorter, Cuz I guess Twilight Doesnt Have all these Fantasy Work, Do we See Castles in Twilight??!! No! We Don't! So Please Stop Comparing Twilight to Harry Potter! Thank You!~
~Next Thing, Alyson Noel's Immortals Series! I've just finished Dark Flame, the 4th book in the Series, I really Love these Series, And it Really Sounds alike with Twilight. I Love both Series, But Alyson Noel's Series are for Teens and Young Adults while Twilight is for Teens to Adults! But I'm wondering if The 1st Book, Evermore, Is Similar to Twilight. But its True, It seems very similar. But I love both Seriees!! :) Ok I'm finished with my Whole Rant Thing! Thanks For Reading! Cyah Soon! :)~
With Love-Kathleen :D
Sunday, August 1, 2010
~Book Review "The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner"~
~Ok, I've read this book about 3 Times, and I really wanna book review about it so Ok! :)
~If you havent read Eclispe in the Twilight Series, I recommend you to Read Eclispe First. Ok, So does of you dont know, Bree is a newborn Vampire, First Introduced in the book, Eclispe, The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner, Is a Book about Her and Her Fellow Newborn Vampire Friends, Before they attack the Cullens. I really enjoyed this book and it gave me SO Much more info on Bree, Riley, and Victoria. This book took me one day to read, Only 178 Pages thats like Less than a Regular Twilight Book. I recommed this Book to Those Twi Lovers, And Anyone interested in Vampires. -Coughs- Kylie. Hahahaha Ok, Its a Really Good Book and a Really Good addition to the Twilight Series! Thats my Book Review! Ok, I need some Help, I'm wonderin how to Attach a Pic to your Blog? Cuz since they changed the Blog Format and Everything, I have NO Idea, How to Put Pics with Your Posts! So if you know how! Please Comment! Telling Me!! :) That Would make me SO Grateful!!! So Thats All, Yes if you read the Previous Blog, No Laptop for a Week.. So no Chps for This Week, But theres a certain chance, i can get on, So I'll try to get on.. :) Anddd! I'm Really Busy This Week! Volleyball Camp and Swim! :D So Yeep! Have a Great Rest of the Week and Cyah!
With Love~ Kathleen :)~
~If you havent read Eclispe in the Twilight Series, I recommend you to Read Eclispe First. Ok, So does of you dont know, Bree is a newborn Vampire, First Introduced in the book, Eclispe, The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner, Is a Book about Her and Her Fellow Newborn Vampire Friends, Before they attack the Cullens. I really enjoyed this book and it gave me SO Much more info on Bree, Riley, and Victoria. This book took me one day to read, Only 178 Pages thats like Less than a Regular Twilight Book. I recommed this Book to Those Twi Lovers, And Anyone interested in Vampires. -Coughs- Kylie. Hahahaha Ok, Its a Really Good Book and a Really Good addition to the Twilight Series! Thats my Book Review! Ok, I need some Help, I'm wonderin how to Attach a Pic to your Blog? Cuz since they changed the Blog Format and Everything, I have NO Idea, How to Put Pics with Your Posts! So if you know how! Please Comment! Telling Me!! :) That Would make me SO Grateful!!! So Thats All, Yes if you read the Previous Blog, No Laptop for a Week.. So no Chps for This Week, But theres a certain chance, i can get on, So I'll try to get on.. :) Anddd! I'm Really Busy This Week! Volleyball Camp and Swim! :D So Yeep! Have a Great Rest of the Week and Cyah!
With Love~ Kathleen :)~
~Please Read.. Important News..~
~Ok Heres the News, I'm not able to use my Dad's Laptop for a Week.. Btw! The reason why im not allowed is, not my Fault!! But i will be extremely busy this week, Volleyball Camp and Swim. So.. This week, i'm going to plan the Chps.. I do have Chp.11 Planned and Chp.12.. But I would be able to Post them this Week.. Or Maybe i can, I dunno about it. So Yep.. Plus i Made over 100 Blogs!!!! Yay!!!! Thank you for Supporting the Ever After Series! Thank you to my Readers, Hannah, Caymen, Kylie and Shaamli! :) I dedicate the first book to all of you guys!! For a Special Treat, i will spoil the Other Titles of the Books in the Ever After Series!!! ;) So Here they Are!
Ever After Series
1# Ever After
2# Twilight Sun
3# Crimson Roses
4# Dark Shadow
Thanks again for Supporting the Series and... Hope you guys like the titles!! And Have a Great 2 Weeks of Summer Vacation! School is creeping up quick and Im terrifed for Reyburn! :) Cyah Soon!
With Love-Kathleen:)
Ever After Series
1# Ever After
2# Twilight Sun
3# Crimson Roses
4# Dark Shadow
Thanks again for Supporting the Series and... Hope you guys like the titles!! And Have a Great 2 Weeks of Summer Vacation! School is creeping up quick and Im terrifed for Reyburn! :) Cyah Soon!
With Love-Kathleen:)
Thursday, July 29, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.10~
~Bree's P.O.V~
~I woke up the next morning, and I looked at Ever's and Catalina's Empty Beds..I sighed, They're aren't here yet... I looked at the clock, 5:30..I dressed myself in a Simple Stripe Hoodie, and Skinny Jeans, Pulled my Hair into a Messy Bun and Grabbed my Books, and headed to my class. Suddenly Denise walked in front of my path. She chewed her Gum, loudly, Popping it right in front of me, I looked at her figure, She was wearing A Pink Blouse, and a White Mini Skirt, Trying to Keep in Dress Code, She wore High Knee Socks, Her hair in Lovely Curls, "Couciler Needs to See You.." She said, twisting one of her Raven Locks. I nodded and turned and walked towards the Couciler's Office. "Miss Evans, Please Come Here.." The Couciler asked. I gulped, Hopeing I wouldn't get kicked out or got in trouble..He took a breath, "I recieved a letter from Jared Thompson...Saying That Your Sister has gotten into a Harsh Accident.." He said. My Throat swelled, "What?" I choked. "Shes in the Hospital right now..I'll let you go and spend some time..I'll give You a week..I'm sorry.." He said, hugging me. My eyes swelled, but I didnt cry, I embraced the couciler back and got up and reuturned to my dorm, packing all of my things and driving off back to San Francisco. I pulled along the driveway of my house, running towards the house, "Cyn? Cynthia??" I yelled, frantically. I walked upstairs, walking into her room, She wasn't there, Tears spilled along my cheeks, "Bree?" Jared called. I ran downstairs and ran to Him. He grabbed me tight, "Shes in really bad condition, Bree..." He muttered into my ear. I started to sob on his warm chest, He held me close. "Wanna Visit her?" He asked. "What happened?" I asked, swallowing back tears. He took a breath, "She was driving from Her work..Didnt see where She was going and Crash aganist another car, Both of the Drivers are in very critical Condition.." He said, His Voice, Calm and Sweet. Tears came upon my eyes again, I hugged Jared tighter.."Please Let me visit her.." I said, He grabbed my hand and led me to his car, we got inside and We Drove Off..~
~End of Chp.10 Hope You Guys Liked it! (:~
~I woke up the next morning, and I looked at Ever's and Catalina's Empty Beds..I sighed, They're aren't here yet... I looked at the clock, 5:30..I dressed myself in a Simple Stripe Hoodie, and Skinny Jeans, Pulled my Hair into a Messy Bun and Grabbed my Books, and headed to my class. Suddenly Denise walked in front of my path. She chewed her Gum, loudly, Popping it right in front of me, I looked at her figure, She was wearing A Pink Blouse, and a White Mini Skirt, Trying to Keep in Dress Code, She wore High Knee Socks, Her hair in Lovely Curls, "Couciler Needs to See You.." She said, twisting one of her Raven Locks. I nodded and turned and walked towards the Couciler's Office. "Miss Evans, Please Come Here.." The Couciler asked. I gulped, Hopeing I wouldn't get kicked out or got in trouble..He took a breath, "I recieved a letter from Jared Thompson...Saying That Your Sister has gotten into a Harsh Accident.." He said. My Throat swelled, "What?" I choked. "Shes in the Hospital right now..I'll let you go and spend some time..I'll give You a week..I'm sorry.." He said, hugging me. My eyes swelled, but I didnt cry, I embraced the couciler back and got up and reuturned to my dorm, packing all of my things and driving off back to San Francisco. I pulled along the driveway of my house, running towards the house, "Cyn? Cynthia??" I yelled, frantically. I walked upstairs, walking into her room, She wasn't there, Tears spilled along my cheeks, "Bree?" Jared called. I ran downstairs and ran to Him. He grabbed me tight, "Shes in really bad condition, Bree..." He muttered into my ear. I started to sob on his warm chest, He held me close. "Wanna Visit her?" He asked. "What happened?" I asked, swallowing back tears. He took a breath, "She was driving from Her work..Didnt see where She was going and Crash aganist another car, Both of the Drivers are in very critical Condition.." He said, His Voice, Calm and Sweet. Tears came upon my eyes again, I hugged Jared tighter.."Please Let me visit her.." I said, He grabbed my hand and led me to his car, we got inside and We Drove Off..~
~End of Chp.10 Hope You Guys Liked it! (:~
Wednesday, July 28, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.9~
~Catalina's P.O.V~
~"You're so stupid Ever!!" I yelled, furiously. Ever sighed in annoyance. "That Was So Close! That Bree Girl was so close of finding out!!" I yelled. "It's Not her fault..You're so Dumb.." Ever mumbled. "That wasn't me! That was Natalie.." Ever said. I looked at her, "I knew that..Ugh! Daniel has to stop bringing Natalie to You...Bree was so close of finding out!" I yelled. A Milky, Hazy Portal appeared and We walked in, Appearing In Front of Prince Daniel..The Leader of The Immortals.. "What is It Catalina?" He growled. "Release Natalie from Ever! This has Gone too far! We have this Human Girl with Us and She was so close of finding out!" I yelled. Are You sure? Shes Knows? I read Daniel's Thoughts. "I'm sure, she is going to find out soon if you keep Natalie in Ever!" I yelled. Daniel smiled, "Natalie..Can You Hear me?" "Yes, Prince Daniel.." Ever said, The Change in her voice was clear, it wasn't Ever, speaking.."Please Tone it Done a Bit..We wouldn't want the Humans knowing Immortals Exist.." He said, sweetly. "Oh Could I??" Natalie asked. I read Natalie's Thoughts, I just want a Body!! "She just wants a body.." I said. Daniel cringed, "If You keep doing this, You won't have a body to devour!!!" He growled. I cringed, "You're not going to Release her??!!!" I yelled. "No..Natalie seems to enjoy this..Just don't get into trouble..Or you and Your Human Pet are Going to Get it.." Daniel said, "Go." I sighed and grabbed Ever's Hand and opened a portal and returned to the Chisum Diminsion..~
~End of Chp.9 COOMEENTT!!:)~
~"You're so stupid Ever!!" I yelled, furiously. Ever sighed in annoyance. "That Was So Close! That Bree Girl was so close of finding out!!" I yelled. "It's Not her fault..You're so Dumb.." Ever mumbled. "That wasn't me! That was Natalie.." Ever said. I looked at her, "I knew that..Ugh! Daniel has to stop bringing Natalie to You...Bree was so close of finding out!" I yelled. A Milky, Hazy Portal appeared and We walked in, Appearing In Front of Prince Daniel..The Leader of The Immortals.. "What is It Catalina?" He growled. "Release Natalie from Ever! This has Gone too far! We have this Human Girl with Us and She was so close of finding out!" I yelled. Are You sure? Shes Knows? I read Daniel's Thoughts. "I'm sure, she is going to find out soon if you keep Natalie in Ever!" I yelled. Daniel smiled, "Natalie..Can You Hear me?" "Yes, Prince Daniel.." Ever said, The Change in her voice was clear, it wasn't Ever, speaking.."Please Tone it Done a Bit..We wouldn't want the Humans knowing Immortals Exist.." He said, sweetly. "Oh Could I??" Natalie asked. I read Natalie's Thoughts, I just want a Body!! "She just wants a body.." I said. Daniel cringed, "If You keep doing this, You won't have a body to devour!!!" He growled. I cringed, "You're not going to Release her??!!!" I yelled. "No..Natalie seems to enjoy this..Just don't get into trouble..Or you and Your Human Pet are Going to Get it.." Daniel said, "Go." I sighed and grabbed Ever's Hand and opened a portal and returned to the Chisum Diminsion..~
~End of Chp.9 COOMEENTT!!:)~
~Twilight Sun Chp.8~
~Thump! Thump! My Eyelids fluttered opened to the noise, I looked at the Clock, Its Still 12:00..I tossed and turned, but couldn't help wondering,what was the noise..I looked at Ever's Bed, The sheets were all tossed off, and Ever wasn't there, My heart skipped a beat, I jumped off and looked around her bed, There I saw Her on the side of her bed, Grumbling in her sleep, tossing and turning. "Ever!" I whispered. Catalina came up behind me, "Ever!" She yelled. Catalina shook Ever furiously, Ever's Eyes opened, "What??" Catalina looked at her, sternly. Ever sighed and shrugged, Catalina's Blue eyes turned tense.."Go back to Bed Bree." She said. I got up, "Are You Ok Ever?" I asked. "Im Fine..Gets some sleep.." She grumbled. I climbed back onto my bed, falling back asleep.~
~The Next Morning, Ever and Catalina weren't at Their beds.. I got up, quickly changed and ran to the Counclier. "sir! Ever and Catalina arent in my dorm!!" I exclaimed. "They had a Family Emergancy and Won't be Back until Next Monday.." he said. I sighed..Thats Weridd..Its Just the second day...I grabbed my books, went to class.~
~End of Chp.8! Srry if Short!!~
~The Next Morning, Ever and Catalina weren't at Their beds.. I got up, quickly changed and ran to the Counclier. "sir! Ever and Catalina arent in my dorm!!" I exclaimed. "They had a Family Emergancy and Won't be Back until Next Monday.." he said. I sighed..Thats Weridd..Its Just the second day...I grabbed my books, went to class.~
~End of Chp.8! Srry if Short!!~
~Twilight Sun Chp.7~
~I organized my side of my dorm, I took the left side bed, Ever took the Right side and Catalina took the bed on the other side. Ever and Cataline left to their Classes, I grabbed my paper and left the dorm. Stopping by The Counciler's Office, I grabbed some books. I walked down the hall, struggling with Books and Trying to find my Classes. Before I knew it, I Bumped into a Young Girl. I fell by her side, Books tumbled on my head..Right Now..I wanted to be invisble.. The Girl looked at me,sternly, Not even showing me, a tiny piece of kindness. She swayed her Dark Raven Curly Hair,and Looked at me with her almond colored eyes. "Sorry." I said. "Sorry?!! You almost messed up my hair!! Jerk!!" She cried. Everyone whispered around us. I got up and grabbed my books. "Denise..Be Nice." The Couciler said. "Ugh! Daddy! Tell her that Shes punished for ruining my hair!!" Denise yelled. The Couciler looked at me,"Get to your Class, Miss Evans, All of You!" He yelled. I ran out, running to my next class.~
~"Yum! Mashed Potatoes and Chicken!" Catalina cried. She devoured her food, Ever rolled her eyes, "So Bree, Where are You from?" She asked, her Voice, sweet like a lily. "San Francisco." I said, grabbing a piece of mashed potatoes. Catalina looked at me with a blank expression,"Hello Catalina?" I asked. "You live with Your sister?" She asked. "Ye-How did you know that??" I asked. Ever laughed, "Shes a Good Guesser, huh Lina?" She joked, elbowing Catalina's Elbow. Catalina's eyes moved away from mine, "Hahhahahah Yeah I am.. Hey are you going to eat that??" She asked,changing the subject. I looked at my half-bitten chicken and barely moved mashed potatoes, "No." She grabbed the plate,happily and of course, ate it. I sighed, "I'm going to the Dorm Guys.." I said, getting up. "Ok" Ever said. I walked back to the Dorm, and layed on my bed. I miss everyone so Much.....I grabbed a Pen and Paper, and started to write a letter to Jared, "Dear Jared, How's Everything There? I'm doing great here,its colder here than San Fran,How's Cyn? I miss all you..I made two new friends, Ever and Catalina, They're Fun and Nice.. Once I get settled in, I'll take a couple pictures, Please Write Back, Luv You-Bree~" I folded the letter and started to walk out the door, The door flinged open,Ever and Catalina walked inside. "Send the Letter to the Counciler.." Catalina said. I turned, "How did you?" I asked, shocked. She shurgged, "Your Holding an Envelope." I sighed and walked out, bringing my letter to the Counciler. "Ok, I'll make sure he gets it." I returned to the Dorm, Changing into a simple striped hoodie, and shorts. I climbed into bed, and fell asleep..~
~End of Chp.7! COOMEENTT!!!:)~
~"Yum! Mashed Potatoes and Chicken!" Catalina cried. She devoured her food, Ever rolled her eyes, "So Bree, Where are You from?" She asked, her Voice, sweet like a lily. "San Francisco." I said, grabbing a piece of mashed potatoes. Catalina looked at me with a blank expression,"Hello Catalina?" I asked. "You live with Your sister?" She asked. "Ye-How did you know that??" I asked. Ever laughed, "Shes a Good Guesser, huh Lina?" She joked, elbowing Catalina's Elbow. Catalina's eyes moved away from mine, "Hahhahahah Yeah I am.. Hey are you going to eat that??" She asked,changing the subject. I looked at my half-bitten chicken and barely moved mashed potatoes, "No." She grabbed the plate,happily and of course, ate it. I sighed, "I'm going to the Dorm Guys.." I said, getting up. "Ok" Ever said. I walked back to the Dorm, and layed on my bed. I miss everyone so Much.....I grabbed a Pen and Paper, and started to write a letter to Jared, "Dear Jared, How's Everything There? I'm doing great here,its colder here than San Fran,How's Cyn? I miss all you..I made two new friends, Ever and Catalina, They're Fun and Nice.. Once I get settled in, I'll take a couple pictures, Please Write Back, Luv You-Bree~" I folded the letter and started to walk out the door, The door flinged open,Ever and Catalina walked inside. "Send the Letter to the Counciler.." Catalina said. I turned, "How did you?" I asked, shocked. She shurgged, "Your Holding an Envelope." I sighed and walked out, bringing my letter to the Counciler. "Ok, I'll make sure he gets it." I returned to the Dorm, Changing into a simple striped hoodie, and shorts. I climbed into bed, and fell asleep..~
~End of Chp.7! COOMEENTT!!!:)~
Monday, July 26, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.6~
~I arrived at the University, Amazed at its Size. I parked my car, grabbed my stuff, and Hurried inside. "Welcome to The University of Southern California...After You have all Pick Your Classes, You'll find your names on the Dorm List, Visits to Family..You'll get to visit them for a week for holidays, and Regular Times, 3 to 4 Days, Please ask Your Counciler for Details..." The Head Pricipal Said. I hurried to the Large Group of People in Line for The Classes, As I choosed my classes, I looked at the Dorm list, Dorm 4B.. I grabbed my bags and went upstairs into my room. Two Girls already arrived in the room, I double checked the door, 4B..... I walked in with a smile, "hey.." One of the Girls said. One of the Girls had Chocolate Dark Chocolate Hair, She had fair Skin and Light Brown Eyes, Her hair slightly touches her shoulders. "I'm Bree." I said. "Ever" The brown haired one said. The Other had Blonde Curly hair that slightly reaches her back, her blue eyes Widened, She too had fair Skin, "Catalina" She introduced. I smiled, "Cool, Are You Guys Like Related?" I asked. Catalina smiled, "Cousins.." She said, brightly. Ever nodded, and muttered something angirly to herself. "What?" I asked. Catalina smiled, "Shes like that.." Ever's eyes shot up, "yeah-yeah..I like to talk to myself.." She said. I smiled...Enjoying Southern California Already....~
~End of Chp.6! Hannah! Catalina is based off of You! Thats your character! Thanks for reading!!~
~End of Chp.6! Hannah! Catalina is based off of You! Thats your character! Thanks for reading!!~
~Twilight Sun Chp.5~
~After the Huge celebration, Cynthia and I cleaned the place, I walked upstairs after and started to Pack. Cynthia came in, Tears in her eyes, "I-I-I can't believe...You're going..Actually Going..." She said, struggling through her tears. I smiled, "I'll Be Fine..and I'll Miss You.." I said, She started to Sob, "I'll Miss You too..How are You getting there?" She asked. "I'm Driving There.." I said. She smiled and wiped her face, "Go Continue to Pack, and Go to Sleep Early, You have to be there at 12:00" She said. I smiled and continued to Pack.~
~I stood next to my Gray Volvo, and watched as Jared's Family and Cynthia help me put my stuff in the Car. "Ok..Goodbyes.." I sighed and Hugged everyone, Getting quotes like, "Good Luck, Visit Us when You can, Write to Us, Be Safe, and Be Good." Cynthia started to sob as She hugged me, "Have Fun" She said in my ear. I walked over to jared and collasped in his arms, "I'll Miss You.." I whispered, He hugged me tighter, "Write to me, K?" he said. I smiled, "Always.." I kissed his lips, and let go, "Love You.." He said. Tears ran into my eyes, "Lo-Love You More.." I said, struggling through tears. "Bye Everyone! I'll visit Soon!!!" I said, climbing into my car, I drove off, and watched Their Figures disappear in the Distance....~
~End of Chp.5! COOOOMMMMENTT! Srry if Short!~
~I stood next to my Gray Volvo, and watched as Jared's Family and Cynthia help me put my stuff in the Car. "Ok..Goodbyes.." I sighed and Hugged everyone, Getting quotes like, "Good Luck, Visit Us when You can, Write to Us, Be Safe, and Be Good." Cynthia started to sob as She hugged me, "Have Fun" She said in my ear. I walked over to jared and collasped in his arms, "I'll Miss You.." I whispered, He hugged me tighter, "Write to me, K?" he said. I smiled, "Always.." I kissed his lips, and let go, "Love You.." He said. Tears ran into my eyes, "Lo-Love You More.." I said, struggling through tears. "Bye Everyone! I'll visit Soon!!!" I said, climbing into my car, I drove off, and watched Their Figures disappear in the Distance....~
~End of Chp.5! COOOOMMMMENTT! Srry if Short!~
~Twilight Sun Chp.4~
~I woke up the next morning, Jumping right out of bed and ran downstairs, "Mail?" I asked. Cynthia nodded and pointed to the huge pile. I grabbed the pile and started sorting it out, Bills, Advirstiments...Bills...My Eyes grew wide, My Hands trembled as I picked up the Satin Envelope that had my Name in Perfect Letters...Breeanna Evans... I ripped the top opened and grabbed the letter, "Dear Miss Evans, You Have Just been accepted by The University of Southern California...Please report as soon as You see This, We Looked forward for our 3 Years with You!" It read, I screamed and jumped for joy, Cynthia looked at me, "I GOT ACCEPTED!!!" I screamed. Cynthia yelped and Hugged me tight and grabbed my letter and read the letter, rapidly. Cynthia screamed again, and Grabbed her cooking stuff, "WE HAVE TO CELEBRATE!!!!!" I smiled and took out my phone and dialed Jared's Number, "What's Up?" he answered. "I GOT ACCEPTED!!!" I screamed. The Line went blank, "hello??" I called. A Knock rang on the Door, I closed my phone and answered the door, "CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!" Jared's Family yelled with Big Grins. Avery hugged me tight, Ron picked me up, and Jared's Mom hugged me. I walked over to jared and smiled, "I knew it." He said with Pride. He picked me, and swayed me around happily. I smiled and laughed as He swayed me around. Cynthia smiled, "K, Dig in!!" She yelled. Our table was full with Many Sorts of Food, Cynthia made. Everyone crowded the table and ate, Avery raised her glass, "Cheers to Bree! For getting accepted!" She said, cheery. Everyone joined and All Clinked their Glasses, I smiled....~
~End of Chp.4 COOMEENTTT!!!!!!!!!~
~End of Chp.4 COOMEENTTT!!!!!!!!!~
~Twilight Sun Chp.3~
~ I went back home and Went Upstairs to My Room. I sighed, When will that University Will Accept Me? I wondered in my Head. Cynthia knocked on my door, "Hey, Dinner is Set." I nodded and changed to an Laced Undershirt and Shorts and Walked downstairs. I sat down and ate my Food in Silence. "Bree? What's Going On?" She asked, concerned. "Just-Just Want that University to Accept me, Everyone Else is Like in an Univeristy..I was emailing Jessie last night and Shes in Stanford already..Jonathon is in Massachutess.." I sighed. "You'll Get In..I know You will.." She said with Pride. I smiled, "Goodnight." and Walked upstairs. As I arrived in my room, I checked my Email, Two New Emails from Jessie and Jon. I clicked Jessie's Email, "Hey Bree! How is there in Southern California? Met any Stars yet? Hahahha Jk! I'm Good! I made two new Friends in Stanford, Amy and Chris, I have a Slight Crush on Chris and I think He does on me too! Please Email Back! Love You-Jessie" I smiled and Repiled, "Hey Bree, I'm great, havent Gotten accepted yet, Thats Cool, Go for it Gurl! Capture his Heart! Reply! Miss You a Ton! Luv ya!~Bree:)" I smiled and pressed send, I answered to Jonathon's email,and laid on my bed, Its barely 11:30... "Pss Bree!!" jared yelled. I rolled my eyes and looked down my window, "What? and Please be quiet...Cyn doesn't know You sneak in..." I said. He climbed swiftly onto my Bedroom. "News?" He asked with a Grin. I pressed my lips together, "No." His grin appeared wider, "Don't Worry..Hopefully tomorrow it will come...." I shrugged and groaned, "Ugh!" He smiled and pressed his warm lips aganist mine, His Huge Body pressed aganist mine, as He pushed me aganist my Pillows, His warm arms wrapping me towards him, I let go, laying on his Chest, Breathing Hard. He kissed me lightly and jumped off, "Goodnight! Bye!" he yelled, running off. I smiled and fell asleep.~
~End of Chp.3! COOMEENTTT!!!!!~
~End of Chp.3! COOMEENTTT!!!!!~
Sunday, July 25, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.2~
~NOTE: Like my New Blog Design? Hahahahaaa! Changed it! :) Next Chp! Puh-Lease! Comment Your Opinion! It totally Helps Me! A TON!!!!!!!! Onward to Chp.2~
~I woke up the Next day and dressed in a simple Tee-shirt and Ripped Skinny jeans. I tied my hair in a simple, yet, messy bun and Ran downstairs. "Mail's here." Cynthia said, calmly. I ran to the table, Hopeing My Acceptance letter was In the Pile. I stormed through the pile, Bills, Bills, Bills, Advirstiment..Coupons..Cynthia's Jury Duty call, I rolled my eyes and exhaled a long breath of disappointment. Once Again, Cynthia cussed and rolled her eyes. "Stupid People, If the Letter doesn't come tomorrow, I'm going to blow up their place." She said, angirly. "Well, Then I wouldn't be acccepted if the Place blew up." I muttered to myself. Cynthia sighed, "Whatever" She muttered under her breath. "Now I'm all Yours, I'm Not Afraid." My Phone rang. I looked at the Caller ID, Jared Thompson, I smiled to myself and answered happily.
"Hey" "Hey What's Up Beautiful?" He asked. I bit my lip as Cynthia watched me, "No Letter yet.." I said, sadly. "Wow. Really? That's Messed." He growled. I sighed again, "Cyn is Really Ticked." He laughed, "That's Funny." Cynthia's Eyes shot through me, "hey I gotta go, Love You! Cyah Later" I said, hanging up. Cynthia placed food on the table and ate silently. I grabbed her hand and squeezed it, "Hey cyn, relax...I'll be accepted..I hope." She smiled and held my hand, "Ok.I just really want you to go to this school..I never had a chance..Now I want You to experince it for me.." She said, with tears in her eyes. I smiled and ate my food and drove to Jared's. Richard greeted me as soon as I pulled along the driveway. "What's Up?" I sighed and gave him a hug. "So You and Ave?" I teased. He rolled his eyes, "Not yet. Getting Over You currently." He said. "Oh. We're just friends k? Have Fun and date that Girl! Shes better than me!" I yelled. Richard smiled, and brought me inside. Avery and Jared's Mom hugged me. Jared came out from the Back, Looking Buffer than Ever, His Perfect Strong Shoulders grew about 2 inches wider. "Wow..Working out are We?" I asked. He smiled, I always Loved His Perfect Wolf-Like Smile. "Nope, Just Got Bigger I guess, What? Impressed?" He asked. I punched him and smiled, "uhh..Yeah..." I said. He chuckled, and Kissed me lightly on the lips. "Hey Bree! Got Accepted Yet?" Ron asked. I turned and looked at Him, Ron hasn't changed neither, Buffed too and His Brown Shaggy Hair were slightly on his shoulders. "Nope." I answered. Ron groaned, "Wow!" Avery exclaimed. Avery still had her brown hair but had it slightly highlighted with Red. I shrugged, "New Look Avery?" I asked. "Like it?" She asked, Twisting her locks, feeling impressed. I laughed, "Like it? I LOVE It!" I yelled. She squealed and Hugged me tight again. "Hey Lunch Is Ready!" Jared's Mom yelled. All of the Guys, Piled on the Table. Jared's Mom smiled and passed along the Food. I smiled as I watched Jared's Family eat.~
~End of Chp.2! COOOMEENTT! Hope You All Liked it! :)~
~I woke up the Next day and dressed in a simple Tee-shirt and Ripped Skinny jeans. I tied my hair in a simple, yet, messy bun and Ran downstairs. "Mail's here." Cynthia said, calmly. I ran to the table, Hopeing My Acceptance letter was In the Pile. I stormed through the pile, Bills, Bills, Bills, Advirstiment..Coupons..Cynthia's Jury Duty call, I rolled my eyes and exhaled a long breath of disappointment. Once Again, Cynthia cussed and rolled her eyes. "Stupid People, If the Letter doesn't come tomorrow, I'm going to blow up their place." She said, angirly. "Well, Then I wouldn't be acccepted if the Place blew up." I muttered to myself. Cynthia sighed, "Whatever" She muttered under her breath. "Now I'm all Yours, I'm Not Afraid." My Phone rang. I looked at the Caller ID, Jared Thompson, I smiled to myself and answered happily.
"Hey" "Hey What's Up Beautiful?" He asked. I bit my lip as Cynthia watched me, "No Letter yet.." I said, sadly. "Wow. Really? That's Messed." He growled. I sighed again, "Cyn is Really Ticked." He laughed, "That's Funny." Cynthia's Eyes shot through me, "hey I gotta go, Love You! Cyah Later" I said, hanging up. Cynthia placed food on the table and ate silently. I grabbed her hand and squeezed it, "Hey cyn, relax...I'll be accepted..I hope." She smiled and held my hand, "Ok.I just really want you to go to this school..I never had a chance..Now I want You to experince it for me.." She said, with tears in her eyes. I smiled and ate my food and drove to Jared's. Richard greeted me as soon as I pulled along the driveway. "What's Up?" I sighed and gave him a hug. "So You and Ave?" I teased. He rolled his eyes, "Not yet. Getting Over You currently." He said. "Oh. We're just friends k? Have Fun and date that Girl! Shes better than me!" I yelled. Richard smiled, and brought me inside. Avery and Jared's Mom hugged me. Jared came out from the Back, Looking Buffer than Ever, His Perfect Strong Shoulders grew about 2 inches wider. "Wow..Working out are We?" I asked. He smiled, I always Loved His Perfect Wolf-Like Smile. "Nope, Just Got Bigger I guess, What? Impressed?" He asked. I punched him and smiled, "uhh..Yeah..." I said. He chuckled, and Kissed me lightly on the lips. "Hey Bree! Got Accepted Yet?" Ron asked. I turned and looked at Him, Ron hasn't changed neither, Buffed too and His Brown Shaggy Hair were slightly on his shoulders. "Nope." I answered. Ron groaned, "Wow!" Avery exclaimed. Avery still had her brown hair but had it slightly highlighted with Red. I shrugged, "New Look Avery?" I asked. "Like it?" She asked, Twisting her locks, feeling impressed. I laughed, "Like it? I LOVE It!" I yelled. She squealed and Hugged me tight again. "Hey Lunch Is Ready!" Jared's Mom yelled. All of the Guys, Piled on the Table. Jared's Mom smiled and passed along the Food. I smiled as I watched Jared's Family eat.~
~End of Chp.2! COOOMEENTT! Hope You All Liked it! :)~
Saturday, July 24, 2010
~Yes! Another Update! Please Read!~
~Ok! First Thing! I'm changing the 2nd Book title to "Twilight Sun" Cuz I didn't wanna feel like I was Copying Miss Alyson Noel's Book! Ok and I'm also changing my Blog Design! Idk Why but I want too! Hahaha! Yep! Short and Simple! Chp.2 Shall be Up Soon!~
~Kathleen~:)
~Kathleen~:)
Friday, July 23, 2010
~Twilight Sun Chp.1~


~"University of Southern California.."
I said, while leaning close on Jared's Furry Shoulder. I laid close to Him, Which He was currently in his Wolf Form. "I wonder if I'll be Accepted.." I said. My Hands went across his Furry Neck, He grinned, as I scratched Him. "Hahahaaaa, Now I don't Need to Bug Cynthia for a Dog..I already got one..A Wild One Actually.." I joked. I looked up at the Night Sky and sighed. I continued to lay on Jared's Fuzzy Shoulder, Then He got up, Walking out. I got up, suddenly, "What? was it something I said??" I yelled. Jared came back, Bare chested, Sweats,and bare Footed, "Hey Sorry About I said.." I muttered. He looked at me and started to laugh, "Sorry for What? You're so Funny Bree!!!" He boomed. I bit my lip, and laughed along. We sat down and I laid on His Broad, Warm, Shoulder. "Why Southern California? How about Stanford? You'll be Closer.." Jared said. I looked at Him, "Cyn wants University of Southern California, She says I have a Good Future there.." I replied. "Pfff! Probably wants You Outta the House!!" He Joked. I rolled my eyes, "Seriously? When I leave, Cyn will probably be Sobbing!!" He laughed, "Fake Tears." "Heck No, I hope I'll get accepted.." I said to myself. Jared's arm grabbed my Chest, "You Probably Will..A Smart, Funny, and yet Beautiful Girl Like You? 100% Acceptence." Jared said. I smiled, "Uhh..Theres More Beautiful Girls than Me out there." I said. "hahahhaaa, I think You're The Prettist.." He said, Kissing My Hair. "How's Richard?" I asked, changing the subject. "Hes Great, We gotten used to Him, Avery seems to be attracted to Him, We're all buddies." Jared said, calmly. "Him and Avery? How Nice." I said, sweetly. He chuckled, "Now I'm all Yours, I'm not Afraid.." My Phone rang. I answered, "Cynthia? Yeah, I'm Here with Jared. K.." I said. Jared watched me and smiled, "Gotta Go?" He said. "You got it." I said. I got up and held his warm hand, "Ok. See You Tomorrow, Hope You get accepted." Jared said. He crushed his warm lips aganist mine, I kissed him back, wrapping my arms around his bare back, He held my head, holding it aganist his. I let go and smiled, "Love You." I said, walking off. "Love You More." He said, leeaving. I got inside my car and drove off. I arrived home, With Cynthia, making Lunch. "Hey Check The Mail." She said. I shot up from my Chair and looked at The Mail, Bills, Bills, Advertisments...None. I sighed in disapointment. "None Cyn" Cynthia whined and cussed. I sighed and sat down, "What were You and Jared doing?" She asked, suspicously. "Talking..Normal Why?" I asked, gulping, Hopeing She doesn't start the "Talk" "Oh Have You Guys, Like You Know, Kiss?" She asked, nervously. Several Times..I thought, "Uhh..A Few Times.." I said. She turned around and placed a Hand on her Hip, "Cynthia!! Don't Start the Talk!! Please!! I know! No Physical or any other things til after I finish the University!!" I yelled, defending myself. She smiled, "Good, Kissing Is Good..Don't Just go Too far..." She said, setting A Plate of Rice on the Table. I rolled my eyes, and grabbed a spoonful of rice and ate silently.~
~End of Chp.1 of Dark Flame! Like it so far? COOOMMEENTTT!!!!!! Pic is Bree and Jared.~
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
~Twilight Sun Preview~
~Here's The Preview of the Next Book in Ever After Series! Dark Flame! :)~ Enjoy!~
~ Univerisity of Southern California Isn't Really That Bad.. The Down Part for Bree, Is Being Away From Her Boyfriend/WereWolf, Jared. An Unexpected Visitor enters her life, Her Dorm Roomate, Ever. Ever seems Upset All the Time, Every night, Ever Struggles in Her Sleep, Soon Bree Finds out.. That Her Best Friend, Is an Immortal, Fighting For Her Body from Wandering Souls, Bree is Suddenly Drawned to Ever, Soon She Finds the Truth about Herself... The More She is in Ever's World, the More Away She is From Jared.... Will She Choose Her Friendship and Truth With Ever? Or Her Relationship with Jared.... ~
~That's What's Twilight Sun is About! :) First Chp is going 2 Be Posted Tomorrow! Do you guys like the Idea? Cooomment What You Think! :)~
~Kathleen~
~ Univerisity of Southern California Isn't Really That Bad.. The Down Part for Bree, Is Being Away From Her Boyfriend/WereWolf, Jared. An Unexpected Visitor enters her life, Her Dorm Roomate, Ever. Ever seems Upset All the Time, Every night, Ever Struggles in Her Sleep, Soon Bree Finds out.. That Her Best Friend, Is an Immortal, Fighting For Her Body from Wandering Souls, Bree is Suddenly Drawned to Ever, Soon She Finds the Truth about Herself... The More She is in Ever's World, the More Away She is From Jared.... Will She Choose Her Friendship and Truth With Ever? Or Her Relationship with Jared.... ~
~That's What's Twilight Sun is About! :) First Chp is going 2 Be Posted Tomorrow! Do you guys like the Idea? Cooomment What You Think! :)~
~Kathleen~
~Ever After Chp.45 Last Chapter~



~A Week Later..~
~I woke up the Next Morning..I sighed and Looked at my Closet..Graduation...Cynthia came in, "Oh My Gosh!! Youre Going to Graduate!!" She said, holding back tears. I sighed and hugged her and got dressed in my Blue and Black Graduation Gown, Under the Gown, I wore a yellow, Blackish Dress, I let my hair down and looked at myself, I touched the Scar, Which is currently healing and is not really visible now...I remebered the Dreaded Day..When I made the Choice of My Life...Choosing between Jared and Richard...Choosing Jared...Jared was released three days from his injury but Richard was currently recovering..I smiled, and got up and Walked downstairs, "Ok, Cynthia, Remember 9:00?" I said, Reminding Her of the Graduation Time. She smiled, and I hopped into my Car and drove off to School. Jessie greeted me,with soaking tears, "I-I Can't believe We're Graduating!! Ok, I'm Going to University of Stanford, What About You?" She asked. "University of Southern California..." I said. "We HAVE To Keep Touch Ok???" She yelled. I nodded, holding back tears wasn't very easy. We Collasped onto each other's arms, and cried. Then We went in Line with Our Other Classmates. I walked over to the stage and sat next to the other students, who were supposed to give speeches. I sighed, I watched as Many Families gathered in the Cafetria. I looked around for Cynthia, finally I found her, Sitting next to her was Avery, Her Brown Hair in Curls, and Jared, grinning wide. I smiled, as Our Principal came up to the Podium and gave his long speech, Then Many Students gave speeches, Finally It was My Turn, I walked up to the Podium, and took a Breath, "Wow..It Has Been an Amazing Year with All of You..This will always been on my Mind, as We all Go Our Seprate Ways, Follow Our Own Paths, Decisions will stop You along the Way, All Sorts of Decisions, Like Love, Schools, Family, Knowing this Decision will Change Your Life...I made a hard Decision, Choosing The Right University, I decided, University of Southern California is For Me..If Anyone of You Choose the Same, I'll Look Forward seeing You There.."I started to Choke Tears. "I'll Miss all of You! I'll always belong to This School, Forver!!" I said, finishing my Speech, Everyone clapped and I looked at Jared, He gave me, a Grin. I smiled and Sat Down, Watching Everyone recievce Their Dipolmas. I walked up when, Mr.Betterns, Smiled, "Good Job Bree Evans..Good Luck!" he said, Shaking my hand, and handing me my Dipolmas. Soon after everyone recived their diplomas, Everyone threw their Graduation Caps In The Air. I smiled as I threw mine and walked over to Cynthia, "Congrats Bree!" She said, I hugged her tight, "Bree! Good Job!!" Avery yelled, Hugging me. "Congratulations Bree" Jared said, Grabbing me into a Huge Hug, "Let's Go eat!" Cynthia yelled. "Wait! I need to change and Visit Someone.." I said. Cynthia nodded in approval, "Well Meet me and Avery at The Sakura Blossom.." Cynthia ordered. I nodded, walking off with Jared. We rode to His house and I quickly changed and walked inside Richard's Room, "Hey Graduate.." Richard greeted. I smiled, "How is it?" I asked. "Doc says I'll be out in Two days." he said with pride. "Thats Great!" I yelled. "Congrats.." he said. I kissed him lightly on the lips, "Rich, I gotta Go!, Big Dinner! Me and Jared will bring leftovers" I said. I got up and started walking out the door, "Wait." Richard said, grabbing my hand. I turned and walked towards him, He put a Small Ring on my Finger, "Don't worry its a graduation Present..." He said. I smiled, "Its Beautiful..Thanks..Bye" I said, leaving, I closed the door, "Ok Let's Go." I said. "Hey I havent Gave You Your Graduation Present." Jared said. I smiled again, "What is it?" I asked. He pressed his warm lips on mine, I kissed back, "I Love You.." I whispered. "Love You More." He said back, We got on His Motorcycle and Rode off....Life Gives Us Decisions, Choose Wisely and It will Affect You the Rest of Your Life...~
~Author's Commment~
End of Ever After! :) Did You Guys Like the Book? Please Comment On The Whole Book and Chp! Don't be Sad Guys! This is Being Made into a Series!!! Hahahahhahahahaha! Surprise!! Next Book is Called Dark Flame, I'll Post the Summary later! Thanks for Reading!!!! Photos are Bree,Jared, and Richard.:)
~Kathleen
~Ever After Chp.44~
~I waited outide jared's House, Screams rang in the House. I jumped at every single one of them. I sighed and looked down...Please! Hope Both of Them are Ok... The Doctor came out, "They're both fine at the Moment..You may Visit Them..I'll be back in a Hour.." The Doctor said. I jumped up and went inside Richard's Room, "Hey." I greeted. I looked at Richard, he layed there, Looking Pale, and Weak, I sat next to his bed, and grabbed his hand, "How are You?" I asked. "I'm Fine..I'm So Sorry Bree..." He said. I looked at Him, "Don't be..It's Over...Just Get Well.." I said,sweetly. "No it isnt..I knew about this..I was selfish..If You choose me, I'll make it up to you.." he said. I bit my lip and sighed, "Richard...I'm Sorry..Your-Your..Not The One..." I stammered. He was silent for a while, "Its Ok....Will I be Second in waiting?" he Joked. I laughed, "Of Course..." I said. "It doesnt matter to me anymore..as Long as Your Happy..I am too..." He said, kindly. "Thanks Richard.." I thanked. I kissed Him On The Cheek, "Love You." I said, walking out, "Love You too, I will always Will..Not Matter who You choose..." He said, sweetly. I closed the door, silently, Then I walked into Jared's Room, "Hey, How is it?" I asked. I looked at His Huge Body, he was sweating, "Doesn't really Hurt, I'll be Out tomorrow.." He said. I sat down and grabbed his warm hand, "Jared..I Love You.." I said. He looked at me, "It wasn't easy..admitting everything to Richard and Me...How's He?" he asked. "He was Fine with it..Took it very slowly.." I said. He grinned, "I'm glad You choose me..." he said, I kissed his warm lips, And Got Up, "Love You Jared.." I said. "Love You More.." He said. I smiled and walked out and reuturned back home....~
~End of Chp.44! Srry if Suckish!! COOOMEEENTTTT!!!!!!!~
~End of Chp.44! Srry if Suckish!! COOOMEEENTTTT!!!!!!!~
~Ever After Chp.43~
~NOTE:Srry about all the switching P.O.V's! Hahahahahaaaaa.:) Onward to da story!!!~
~Bree's P.O.V~
~Jared looked at us, in fury, "I knew it! You were just using me!!!" He yelled, "You Choose Him!!!" I started to cry, "No!! No!!" I yelled. I looked at Richard, he stood there, watching the Fight. "Damn it! hes Better than me huh?, Ugh! I really Loved You!! You didnt Know That Huh??" He cried, angirly. He kicked a rock furously into the river. "Jared!! Stop!!" I yelled. He started walking off, "Jared Thompson!! Where are you going??" I yelled. He ignored me and continued walking off, Tears rolled down my cheek, "Ja-Jared!! Kiss Me!!!"I Blurted. He stopped for a while, "Bree?" Richard asked. I ignored him as Jared came closer to me, He pressed his warm lips into mine, I wrapped my arms around his neck as he wrapped his arms around my waist, while one hand was tangled in my hair. I let go and sighed, "It's Just Like Our first Kiss in the Rain.." He said, He kissed my head, "Where are you going??" I asked. He smiled, "the Fight, I'm missing so exciting action." he said, walking off. I looked at Richard, He stood there, speechless. "You Know I Love You and Jared.." I said. He looked at me and stood silent. Suddenly a Figure jumped out, "Ha! Thanks for Stalling her Richard!" the Figure yelled. "Wha??" I yelled. "My Pleasure Mistress Zega..." Richard said, slyly. I was shocked, "You Liar!! You said you would stop her!!!!" I yelled. Richard stood there, Mistress Zega smiled, "Sweetie This Wont hurt a Bit.." She said, She grabbed fist-fulls of my hair, I screamed in pain, "AHHH!!! RICHARD!!! JARED!!!!" I yelled. "Shut Up!!" Mistress Zega yelled. She put her hand over my mouth, I bit her finger and kicked her. She cried and fell back, I started running, "Jared??!!! HELP!!!!!" I yelled. Mistress Zega grabbed me arm and pushed me aganist the rocks, Richard got up and kicked Mistress Zega. I wiped my cheek, Blood...I stared at Richard and Mistress Zega, fighting. Mistress Zega pushed Richard hard onto the ground, then released a Blackish-darkish Shadow ball at Him. Richard cried in Pain, "RICHARD!!!!" I yelled. Mistress Zega smiled and walked towards me, Suddenly a reddish-brownish Wolf apppeared at my defense. I smiled, as Jared grabbed Mistress Zega's Arm. Suddenly Jared started howling in pain, then Mistress Zega grabbed his Furry Back and A Huge Crunch rang through. "JARED!!! RICHARD!!!" I yelled, helplessly. Jared phased back to his Human form, laying on the ground in pain, "Running out of Options Bree Evans.." Mistress Zega responded. Pain ran through every part of my body, I screamed in pain, As Mistress Zega smiled, and grabbed my hair. A Huge Roar ran through, A White Wolf Jumped and Grabbed Mistress Zega, Pulling Her into the Rest of the Forest, The Pain released from my body, I panted and ran to Jared and Richard, "B-Bree.." Jared stammered, He grimaced at the pain, I smiled, and walked over to Richard, And started to cry, Ron and Gerald ran to Jared, and carried him, I looked at them, Then another group of boys came and carried Richard, Avery came out, her curly hair in messy tangles. She smiled, "Shes Long Gone.." I ran up to her and hugged her tight. She hugged me back and we followed The Boys back to Jared's House...~
~End of Chp.43! Srry if Suckish! So Close to The End!!!!~
~Bree's P.O.V~
~Jared looked at us, in fury, "I knew it! You were just using me!!!" He yelled, "You Choose Him!!!" I started to cry, "No!! No!!" I yelled. I looked at Richard, he stood there, watching the Fight. "Damn it! hes Better than me huh?, Ugh! I really Loved You!! You didnt Know That Huh??" He cried, angirly. He kicked a rock furously into the river. "Jared!! Stop!!" I yelled. He started walking off, "Jared Thompson!! Where are you going??" I yelled. He ignored me and continued walking off, Tears rolled down my cheek, "Ja-Jared!! Kiss Me!!!"I Blurted. He stopped for a while, "Bree?" Richard asked. I ignored him as Jared came closer to me, He pressed his warm lips into mine, I wrapped my arms around his neck as he wrapped his arms around my waist, while one hand was tangled in my hair. I let go and sighed, "It's Just Like Our first Kiss in the Rain.." He said, He kissed my head, "Where are you going??" I asked. He smiled, "the Fight, I'm missing so exciting action." he said, walking off. I looked at Richard, He stood there, speechless. "You Know I Love You and Jared.." I said. He looked at me and stood silent. Suddenly a Figure jumped out, "Ha! Thanks for Stalling her Richard!" the Figure yelled. "Wha??" I yelled. "My Pleasure Mistress Zega..." Richard said, slyly. I was shocked, "You Liar!! You said you would stop her!!!!" I yelled. Richard stood there, Mistress Zega smiled, "Sweetie This Wont hurt a Bit.." She said, She grabbed fist-fulls of my hair, I screamed in pain, "AHHH!!! RICHARD!!! JARED!!!!" I yelled. "Shut Up!!" Mistress Zega yelled. She put her hand over my mouth, I bit her finger and kicked her. She cried and fell back, I started running, "Jared??!!! HELP!!!!!" I yelled. Mistress Zega grabbed me arm and pushed me aganist the rocks, Richard got up and kicked Mistress Zega. I wiped my cheek, Blood...I stared at Richard and Mistress Zega, fighting. Mistress Zega pushed Richard hard onto the ground, then released a Blackish-darkish Shadow ball at Him. Richard cried in Pain, "RICHARD!!!!" I yelled. Mistress Zega smiled and walked towards me, Suddenly a reddish-brownish Wolf apppeared at my defense. I smiled, as Jared grabbed Mistress Zega's Arm. Suddenly Jared started howling in pain, then Mistress Zega grabbed his Furry Back and A Huge Crunch rang through. "JARED!!! RICHARD!!!" I yelled, helplessly. Jared phased back to his Human form, laying on the ground in pain, "Running out of Options Bree Evans.." Mistress Zega responded. Pain ran through every part of my body, I screamed in pain, As Mistress Zega smiled, and grabbed my hair. A Huge Roar ran through, A White Wolf Jumped and Grabbed Mistress Zega, Pulling Her into the Rest of the Forest, The Pain released from my body, I panted and ran to Jared and Richard, "B-Bree.." Jared stammered, He grimaced at the pain, I smiled, and walked over to Richard, And started to cry, Ron and Gerald ran to Jared, and carried him, I looked at them, Then another group of boys came and carried Richard, Avery came out, her curly hair in messy tangles. She smiled, "Shes Long Gone.." I ran up to her and hugged her tight. She hugged me back and we followed The Boys back to Jared's House...~
~End of Chp.43! Srry if Suckish! So Close to The End!!!!~
~Ever After Chp.42~
~Richard's P.O.V~
~I looked around, Pure Victory...I looked at Mistress Zega, She to, was smiling with Joy. I sighed and saw a Figure run out to the Forest, "This One is Mine." I muttered. I ran, following the Figure, Finding the Figure, stopping by the Nearest River. "Bree?" I asked. She turned, Her eyes were spiiling with tears, she ran and collasped onto me. "Why??" She yelled. I held her close, and hugged her tight. "I'm Sorry...Theres Nothing we can do..." I said. She looked at me, and sighed.."Have You Choosen yet?" I asked. "No..Please..I'm not ready.." She muttered. I grinned, "This will probably change your mind.." I said. I placed my lips into hers, I held her by the waist, bringing her close, She kissed back, wrapping her arms around me, Finally! Shes Mine!! I thought, A Huge Growl Rang through, Making Bree let go, I looked in panic but grinned in pride, Jared was watching, He was in his human form, Staring at us in anger, I smiled, Plan sucessful....~
~End of Chp.42! Srry if short and Suckish!! COOOMMENNTTTTT!!!!! hahaha, I totally love the Team Richard and Team Jared idea!!! Hahahhahaha!~
~I looked around, Pure Victory...I looked at Mistress Zega, She to, was smiling with Joy. I sighed and saw a Figure run out to the Forest, "This One is Mine." I muttered. I ran, following the Figure, Finding the Figure, stopping by the Nearest River. "Bree?" I asked. She turned, Her eyes were spiiling with tears, she ran and collasped onto me. "Why??" She yelled. I held her close, and hugged her tight. "I'm Sorry...Theres Nothing we can do..." I said. She looked at me, and sighed.."Have You Choosen yet?" I asked. "No..Please..I'm not ready.." She muttered. I grinned, "This will probably change your mind.." I said. I placed my lips into hers, I held her by the waist, bringing her close, She kissed back, wrapping her arms around me, Finally! Shes Mine!! I thought, A Huge Growl Rang through, Making Bree let go, I looked in panic but grinned in pride, Jared was watching, He was in his human form, Staring at us in anger, I smiled, Plan sucessful....~
~End of Chp.42! Srry if short and Suckish!! COOOMMENNTTTTT!!!!! hahaha, I totally love the Team Richard and Team Jared idea!!! Hahahhahaha!~
~Ever After Chp.41~

~NOTE: Almost at The End!!!! Ack!!!! Tension is rising!!!!~
~Bree's P.O.V~
~I simply sat down, and watched the Clock...5:30...I gulped and sighed, Jared came in, and sat down next to me. "Hey..30 Minutes until the Battle.." He said, Kissing me, lightly on the head, and walked out. I sighed and sat down on Their front Porch, "Hey Bree, Werent You with Jared?" Avery asked. I jumped and turned, Avery's goregous brown hair was in Curly Locks, Her eyes full of Makeup, "Whoaa..What's The Ghetto?" I asked, shocked. "hahahha, Felt Like it, Thats all." She said, shrugging. "You Look Goregous.." I muttered. She blushed, "Wow..Thanks..You Look Pretty Too.." She said. I shrugged, I was wearing my normal, laced undershirt and shorts look, with my hair in a messy bun. I laughed, "yeah..What Time is it?" I asked. "About 5:45.." She said, gettting up, "Gotta Go Prepare." Avery hugged me and I smiled, "Hey, Be careful out there.." I said. She smiled and left. I sighed and looked at the sky.~
~We arrived at the forest, I sat down on a hard rock, and watched the boys prepare. I sighed, "They're Here.." Avery said. Dark Figures were walking far out, Coming towards us, Thousands of them. All of them, phased into their wolf forms and started charging. I gulped and grabbed my sleeves, The Battle began, One of the Darklings threw some sort of tree at one of the wolves. I looked around for Jared, finding Him, attacking a small darkling. I searched for Richard, finding Him, watching with Pride. I couldn't stand the Violence..I ran out towards the Forest, stopping near a lake, Tears spilled and stained my Shirt....I cried and cried..~
~End of Chp.41! COOMENTTTT!!! Pic is Avery! ;) Hahahhaha!~
Tuesday, July 20, 2010
~Ever After Chp.40~
~Richard's P.O.V~
~"Dang It!" I yelled, I kicked a small rock into the river, "Stupid Jared!" I cried. I ran to Mistress Zega's Tower. "Yes Richard?" She asked, sweetly. "That Dog Knows You want Bree..Shes Knows.." I said, angirly. "NO! This Cant Happen! I need That Bree Girl!!!!" She yelled. I nodded, "How are we supposed to get her?" I asked. "No...I have a Plan.." She said, happily. I grinned, "Good..Why do You need Bree? Mistress Zega?" I asked. "She'll make a happy addition to our council..She'll have a Special Power...if She joins Us, You could have her....Jared wouldn't even touch anymore.." She said. I smiled, Felix came in, "Mistress Zega, What Time are we due to the battle tomorrow.." He asked. "Hmm...Exactly 6:00..Gather them and prepare them.." Mistress Zega ordered. Felix nodded and did what he was told. I smiled, "I call The Brownish-Reddish Wolf.." I said. Carrie pouted, "I wanted that One!!" She yelled. "Too Bad..hes Mine.." I muttered. Charity smiled, "I call the Small White One.." "Ugh!" Carrie yelled. I laughed, Cant wait to Crack Jared's Body to Pieces.....~
~End of Chp.40 COOMMEENTT! NO Picture today! Tomorrow there will be a Picture!:) Srry If Short! Enjoy~
~"Dang It!" I yelled, I kicked a small rock into the river, "Stupid Jared!" I cried. I ran to Mistress Zega's Tower. "Yes Richard?" She asked, sweetly. "That Dog Knows You want Bree..Shes Knows.." I said, angirly. "NO! This Cant Happen! I need That Bree Girl!!!!" She yelled. I nodded, "How are we supposed to get her?" I asked. "No...I have a Plan.." She said, happily. I grinned, "Good..Why do You need Bree? Mistress Zega?" I asked. "She'll make a happy addition to our council..She'll have a Special Power...if She joins Us, You could have her....Jared wouldn't even touch anymore.." She said. I smiled, Felix came in, "Mistress Zega, What Time are we due to the battle tomorrow.." He asked. "Hmm...Exactly 6:00..Gather them and prepare them.." Mistress Zega ordered. Felix nodded and did what he was told. I smiled, "I call The Brownish-Reddish Wolf.." I said. Carrie pouted, "I wanted that One!!" She yelled. "Too Bad..hes Mine.." I muttered. Charity smiled, "I call the Small White One.." "Ugh!" Carrie yelled. I laughed, Cant wait to Crack Jared's Body to Pieces.....~
~End of Chp.40 COOMMEENTT! NO Picture today! Tomorrow there will be a Picture!:) Srry If Short! Enjoy~
~Ever After Chp.39~



~NOTE:Changed My Story to "Ever After"
~I woke up the Next Morning, and Got Dressed, I dressed myself in a Tank Top and Skinny Jeans, I sat at the table and heard howling and laughter. I rolled my eyes and looked out the window, Jared was howling with laughter with Gerald laughing along. I rolled my eyes, Idiots..I ate some bread and walked on to Richard's. Richard was shocked when he saw me. "hey Sorry about last night.." he said, Kissing me, lightly on the lips. "Dude..Youre going to get Killed By jared.." I said. "Wha? me? nah..More like Him.." He said, chuckling. "What? You're Kidding Right?" I shook my head, "Maybe You dont know what I can do." He said. I shrugged and he ran past me, His speed was so fast. "Whoa..jared can outrun You." I said. He laughed, and Threw a Blackish, Darkish Ball at me. It stopped near my feet, "Still Think?" He bragged. I sighed, "Just Don't Get hurt." I said. "Never." He said, hugging me. I hugged him back and was shocked when I saw Jared coming our way. I let go, "jared?" I asked. He Looked at me, then to Richard. "Hey..I'm Warning You, When Your Kind steps on Our Land again and starts a Fight again.." jared said sternly. "Don't worry, We're excited about this fight..." Richard said, more happily than Angry. "Fine.Did You tell her Yet?" Jared asked. "What??" I asked. Richard sighed and stiffned. "Go, Shes the One, Your Mistress Wants.." Jared said, in Full Monotone, "Oh My Gosh, You Freakin Jerk!You're helping her huh?" I asked,sternly to Richard. "No.I'm trying to stop her..." Richard said. I sighed, and started walking off with jared, "hey, Where are You going?" He asked. "I'm Going, Bye!" I said, sternly and getting on the motorcycle with jared. "Hey Lose the Grin Jared, Get me back to your place." I muttered. He grinned, "Hold Tight." He said, happily. I sighed and wrapped my arms around his warm, big body.~
~End of Chp.39! COOMENNTT! Pics above is Jared,Bree,and Gerald Enjoy!:)~
~Please Read! Important Update! :)~
~Ok Quick Quick Update! You Know Who How The Story Is Called "Unconditional Love" I'm changing The Title to "Ever After" Cuz After this Book is Done! I'll be writing another one in the Series! You'll get a Taste of the Second Book at The End of "Ever After" Thanks! For Reading! Hahahaha, A Quick Shout Out to Caymen! Happy Birthday Buddy! Enjoy this Special Day! Any of You Guys Have Any Idea for My Next Book's Title? I want the Title to Be Like... Idk.. Like Alyson Noel's Series, Titles such like Ever More, Shadowland, Blue Moon, Dark Flame. I want the Title to Be Mysterious, Romantic, And Dark... Cuz My Books will Be Like That. :) ^ ^ Thanks! Chp.39 And 40 Will Be Up Soon! Quick Shout Out to Kylie! Author of The Hall of the Mountain King, Hope Your Finger gets Better and If You Guts Haven't Read Her Story, It's Pretty Good! She won't be writing in a While due to an Injury On her Left Hand! Get Better Soon! Thanks For Reading! :)~
<3Kathleen Gonzales
<3Kathleen Gonzales
Sunday, July 18, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.38~

~I stomped off, back into the Cafetria. I drank Lots of Punch, and just stared. Jared came back, "I'm sorry about that." He said. I stared at him, blankly. "let's Go..It's about 12:00 right now." He said. I nodded and walked with Him and Gerald and Ron. I sat in the sit of the car, and silently rememebered what happened, "She'll Decide when She's Ready.." Richard's voice went in my head. "Fine. And She will..." Jared's Voice came in. I shook the thoughts out. Jared grabbed my hand, "Don't worry about it, Tell us when You are Ready..." Jared said, calmly. I clutched his Warm Hand, and Sighed. Soon we arrived at His House and I quickly changed into a Tank-Top and Sweats. I came out and sat down in their front porch. "Hey..Bree..." A Sharp Voice called. I jumped and turned around, "Avery??" I yelled. She came and sat down, "Look..I'm Sorry.." She said. "About How I am Acting..." She said. "Why? I know that You hate me.." I muttered. "I'm jealous..I wish I was You.." She said, Looking up at the dark Sky. "I-I-I'm in Love with Jared too.." She stammered. I was shocked, "You're so Lucky..and With Your decision, You should Choose Jared." She said. "I Love Both of Them, Avery.." I said. She was silent, "Really You Should choose him, I've been around him ever since I was 12 and Never Captured His Heart...If I were You, I would say Yes to Him.." Avery said. I nodded, "I'll think about it.." She smiled, This was the First Time I saw Her smile, She Looked so Beautiful. "Good Night, Hope we get along more, Our Final Training for the Battle is tomorrow.." She said, walking back into the house. I gulped, The Battle! I completely forgot about it, My Heart skipped a Beat, I sighed, and Started to Cry for Richard and Jared.....~
~End of Chp.38 Srry if Suckish! :( COMMENT!! Pic above is Avery.~
~Unconditional Love Chp.37~

~Bree's P.O.V~
~I kept my eye on Jared, As he sat outside. I sighed and walked out, "I'm sick and Tired of You, Sitting Here. Go Inside." I said. He smiled, and Hugged Me. "Wait a Minute." Jared said, running out. I shurgged and started talking to People. Jessie came by and we chatted, I looked outside, jared hasn't come back...I excused myself and ran outside. "Jared??" I yelled. I heard two angry voices, yelling in the Parking Lot. I ran there and saw Jared and Richard..Fighting again. "She doesn't Know who she wants!!" jared yelled. "Oh yeah..Guess?" Richard yelled. I came between them, "Hey! Please Stop!" I yelled. They ignored Me. "She'll Say it when Shes Ready.." Richard said sternly. "Fine and She will.." Jared said, in Full Monotone. The Principal came by and tried to seprate the two. "Boys..No Fighting the Parking Lot, Hello Miss Evans, Please tell your friends to leave.Or else they'll get run over.." He said, I nodded, and The two walked away.~
~Srry if such a short chp! End of Chp.37! Pic above is Bree! :) Some quotes was from Eclispe! hahaha yeah!~
~Unconditional Love Chp.36~

~Richard's P.O.V~
~"What Richard?? I couldn't Help it!!! I wanted to Kill a Wolf!!!" Carrie yelled. "Don't Let Mistress Zega know about this..Don't worry, we'll get to kill one, in a Few Days.." I said. She smiled, "Oh and Thanks for Hurting that Jared dude..I always wanted to do that but Bree.." I said. "No Problem..Why Do You Love that Mortal?" She asked. "Shes different..She cares about me, Shes Like everything I need..." I said. Mistress Zega came in, "Carrie? Killing a Wolf Early?" She snapped. I looked at Charity, She smiled, brightly. "Sorry, maam..Couldn't Help it.." Carrie said, softly. Mistress Zega smiled,"I know We all want to attack the Wolves so We could attack all the Human Souls.." She said, Felix smiled, "Continue training the Darklings, Felix.." Mistress Zega ordered. Felix smiled and left as ordered. "How's the Mortal Problem?" Mistress zega asked. "I'm Getting to it... Shes falling helplessly for me.." I said, grinning with Pride. "You Should go over to the Prom..Looks like she has a Wolf as Her date.." Mistress Zega suggested. I nodded and quickly ran out to the Prom, Not Letting Jared touch her.~
~End of Chp.36! COMMENT! Pic above is Richard! Listenin 2 His Ipod! LOL.:) Hope You Guys Liked it! :)~
~Unconditional Love Chp.35~

~ I woke up the Next day and Got ready for School, I dressed myself in a Checkered Shirt and Shorts, and walked outside. "Hey, I'm driving You.." Jared said, He was on the Roof of the His Truck, Shirtless. I climbed in and sat down. "Prom Huh?" He asked, starting the car and driving off. "Don't even talk about it..I have to Go.." I muttered. "I'll Go." He said, brightly. "NO..Don't even think about it!" I yelled. I got off and started walking. Jared honked, And started Waveing, I rolled my eyes and waved back, Finally he drove off. Jessie jumped up to me, "That jared Dude is Soo Cutee and Hott!!" She squealed, "I wish Travis is Like that.." I sighed and walked towards class, "Hey Bree, Can You help me set up the Prom decorations?" Jessie asked. "Sure.." I said. We went around the hallway, and Started hanging Pink Ribbons, Red Ribbons. I walked over and started helping people, Preparing the Food and Drinks. Then I went to Class.~
~"Ugh! Stupid Strap!!" I said. It was about 5:30, Prom is in 30 minutes. I finally got myself dressed, and I appiled a Blush, Mascara, and Curled my Hair, I walked out of the Room, "Woww..You Look Beautiful.." Jared said. I scoffed, "No I don't.." I muttered. "hahahah We're coming.." Jared said, walking behind me, "Ugh! No!" I yelled, slamming the Door. I walked and drove myself to Prom. I walked inside and saw jessie dancing with Travis, She gave a Smile and walked towards me, "You Look Goregous!!!" She yelled. I rolled my eyes, "C'mon dance with Me!!!" Jessie said, pulling Me. I danced for a while with Jessie, after that I walked to the Refreshments. Jessie ran to me, "Did You Invite jared?" She asked. "No." I said, sharply. "Oh..He's Over There.." She said. I turned and Saw jared, Ron, and gerald. I rolled my eyes, "I said NO!!" I yelled. "It's Fun not Listenin to Youu." jared joked. "Theres a Party??" Ron yelled, eager to join. "Cool, Let's Go In.." Gerald said, pulling Ron inside. I scoffed, "UGH!!! I HATE YOU!!" I yelled. "Yeah I Know..Hate is a Passion You Know." Jared said, Smiling. I rolled my eyes and walked away in anger.~
~End of Chp.35 COOOMMENNTTT!! Pic Above is Bree in her Prom Dress.:) Hope You Guys Like this Chp.~
~Unconditional Love Chp.34~

~"Where Did You GO??" Jared asked. "I went to school and Went shopping with Jessie.." I said. I coughed, Jared scoffed, "You're still Sick and You went to school??!!" He yelled. "I'm just coughing.." I muttered. He rolled his eyes and grabbed me into a Big Bear Hug. "What's Going On Bree?" Ron yelled. I laughed, "I'm Being Punshied by Jared!" I yelled. He chuckled, Jared laughed, "I would never do that." he said. We went inside and I ate some soup again. Suddenly a Large Growling Noise wnt through the Room. I jumped and followed the Others, Outside. A darkish-Brownish wolf was growling at A Young Blonde Girl. "Who's That??" I asked. "Stupid Gerald.." he Muttered, angrily. There Jared turned into his Wolf Form. "jared??" I yelled, As Jared ran to Gerald. The Young Blonde Girl Moved fast, Right Behind Gerald, Closing her eyes. "Carrie!!" A Voice yelled in the distance. The Young Girl, Opened her Eyes, Her eyes, Blood-Shot Red. She ignored the Voice and closed her eyes again. "Carrie!!" the voice yelled. Its Richard! He came out and ran, faster than a Speeding car. Gerald Howled in Pain, "What are You Doing to Him??" I yelled. Jared jumped furiously and trying to attack the Girl, But Missing. Carrie grabbed him by His Furry Neck, and Closing her eyes. Suddenly jared started howling in Pain. "STOP!!!" I yelled. Richard grinned, then looked at me. "Stop carrie!!" He yelled. Tears started falling down my face. Carrie let go and ran to Richard. I ran to jared, "Nothing..He's Not Hurt..Just Blacked out.." Richard said to me. Richard gave me a kiss on my head and Ran along with carrie. I sighed, wiped my tears, and watched as the Boys carried Jared's Lifeless body inside. He woke up a Few Hours later, I kissed him on the Cheek, and smiled, "Freakin Jerk!" I yelled. He laughed, And Got Up. "hey!! Doesn't it Hurt??" I asked. "No." He smiled. I rolled my eyes, I went on my bed and went to sleep.~
~End of Chp.34!! COMMENT! Pic above is Jared!:) Felt Like Putting a Picture!:)~
~Unconditional Love Chp.33~

~I came back home, And dressed in a Plain Tee-Shirt and Shorts, and Started going to school, Luckily Jared wasnt awake. I arrrived at school and Jessie greeeted me, "hey Bree! Do you mind shopping with me today?" She asked. I shrugged, "Sure.." I said. "Prom is tomorrow night!!!! Ok, After School Ok???" She asked. I nodded and started walking to class, and sighed, A Girls Night today....I dunno If I'm going to Prom....~
~"Bree!!" Jessie called. She stood near her Car, a Shiny Gray BMW. I rolled my eyes and walked towards her. "Hey Jess, Let's Go.." I said, climbing into the Car. "So How's are You? I havent gotten a chance to talk to You." Jessie said. "I'm Good..Hanging out with Jared.." I muttered. "Who?" She asked. "jared, Hes the Dude who fought with Jonathon.." I said, in monotone. "OHH! The Hot Indian Dude!!!!" She squealed. "How old is he?? Hes so Hot!! Hes so Big!!!" "Hes only 19..." I said. "WHAT???? He Looks like a Twenty-One Year Old!!!!!!!" She yelled. "Hahahahha Thats Funny.. " I said. She smiled, We Pulled over near The Dress Shop and Walked in. "oooo!!" Jessie squealed. I looked around, There were dresses everywhere, and Jessie was pulling every Light Pink Dress off the Racks. I stood near the Dressing Room, "Go try one of thoses on, I gotta find myself a Dress.." I said. I walked around the dresses, seeing all sorts of designs, I chose a Simple White, One strap dress, It Flowers all over the Strap. I smiled and paid for the dress and sat near the dressing rooms. Jessie came out, Showing tons of Pink Dresses, I finally choose, the Cute Pink, Non-Strap.. She smiled and bought the dress. We got something to eat and went home, "Bree! You never got a Dress! dang it!" Jessie yelled. "No it's ok..I got one already.." I said. She relaxed and dropped me off at Jared's House, "Thanks for Shopping with me! Cyah Tomorrow!!" She said, driving away. I sighed and walked towards Jared's House.~
~End of Chp.33! COMMENT!! :) The Pic Above is Bree and Jessie, Haven't posted a Pic in a While! Hope You Guys Liked it!:)~
Saturday, July 17, 2010
~Despicable Me Review~
~Hey Everyone, Just Watched Despicable Me, a Funny, adorable, Family movie. Steve Carell and Miranda Cosgrove stars, I LOVE the Movie, It's Cute and Funny.:) I recommend this movie to Everyone!:) Heres a taste of it, Gru is the 2nd Most Evil Villian, Being topped by Victor, He Plans to steal the moon to be At 1st again, But Finding three girls in his life, Turns this Evil Villian's World, Upside down. hahaha, It's Such a Cute and Funny Movie and I hope everyone can watch this movie. :P Chp.33 will be up soon! Thanks for reading! :)~
~Kiki :)
~Kiki :)
Friday, July 16, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.32~
~I snuck Out, early about at 4:00, And started to look for Richard, There I saw Him, Calling out in to my Window Pane. "Richard!!" I yelled. He turned around, and smiled, "Bree!!" He called, He ran to me, and hugged me tight, "Haven't seen you in a while, but...Where do you wanna go today?" He asked. "Just To the Beach, I just wanna see the sun Rise....I said ".Why werent you at your house?" He asked."Spending time at Jared's..." I muttered. He grumbled something to himself, "What??" I asked. "Nothing..Let's Goo.." he said. "Richard..Why are you fighting Jared and His Family?" I asked. He took a deep breath, "We have too..Mistress Zega says.." He said. "What? Whoo??" I asked, "Our Leader..You Know what, we're here to hang out not talk about fights.." He said, trying to change the subject. We arrived at the Beach and sat down, It was still sorta dark, I started to cough, "hey? You're sick? Crap Bree, You're going to get sick moreee." He said. "You wnated to hang out, so here we are..." I said. "Yeah..I guess..What's chillin?" He asked. "Prom is coming upp...Ugh!..Just going there for fun..." I said, disgusted. "You asking anyone? I'm free anyday.." he suggested. "Jared is too..You Know.." I snapped. "Ugh..Bree? I don't get it?? You Love me or Him??" He asked. "I Love both!!! I Just-Just-Just..can't choosee..." I stammered, "Bree..The Choice is made..." He said, softly, Kissing me, His soft lips toucing mine, I let go, "Rich! You're going to get yourself sick!!!" I yelled. "I never get sick.." He mutttered, Kissing me again. I sighed and kissed back, Wrapping my arms around his neck, The kiss sent thoughts in my Head, Jared?? or Richard?? Which One???? I let go, and laid on his legs, We watched the Sun Rise, "Gotta Go..Jared is going to send a search party again.." I said. "Byee.." Richard said, sadly. Richard?? Or Jared?? The thoughts kept popping in my Head.~
~End of Chp.32! COMMENT:) srry If short!!!!!:(~
~End of Chp.32! COMMENT:) srry If short!!!!!:(~
~Unconditional Love Chp.31~
~I woke up, laying on the bed, "You Got a Fever, Bree.." Jared said. I tossed, and saw Him, Sitting next to my bed. I felt extremely hot, I started coughing, "Shoot..Cynthia.." I said. "Shh!! Just relax.." He said, Jared's mom came in with a Bowl of Soup, and I ate it all, Then I went into the Bathroom and Changed to my Pjs, An Laced undershirt and Simple Thigh-Sweats. I laid back on the bed and started to sleep, "Don't worry Bree..Just Rest.." He said, Kissing the Top of My head. He left the room and I fell asleep.~
~"Richard??" I yelled. I was suddenly in the forest, "Jared??" I yelled, again. I ran around, and saw the Two fighting again, Jared in his Wolf Form.. Richard grinning, "NOOO!!!" I yelled. They didnt seem to hear me, I ran to them but Some Force was blocking me, I watched helplessly, As Richard ran and hurt Jared, Jared bitting Richard, I couldn't stand seeing the people I love, Get Hurt..."STOPPP!!!!!!!" I yelled. Suddenly..I woke Up..I gasped and held my laced strap, tight. Sweat ran through my head, I turned and saw Jared, Snoring,soundly. I sighed and kissed him on the Head. I climbed into bed and fell asleep again, forgetting the Horrible nightmare, Well at least trying to forget it...~
~End of Chp.31 Srry if soooo Short! :( Enjoy! : )~
~"Richard??" I yelled. I was suddenly in the forest, "Jared??" I yelled, again. I ran around, and saw the Two fighting again, Jared in his Wolf Form.. Richard grinning, "NOOO!!!" I yelled. They didnt seem to hear me, I ran to them but Some Force was blocking me, I watched helplessly, As Richard ran and hurt Jared, Jared bitting Richard, I couldn't stand seeing the people I love, Get Hurt..."STOPPP!!!!!!!" I yelled. Suddenly..I woke Up..I gasped and held my laced strap, tight. Sweat ran through my head, I turned and saw Jared, Snoring,soundly. I sighed and kissed him on the Head. I climbed into bed and fell asleep again, forgetting the Horrible nightmare, Well at least trying to forget it...~
~End of Chp.31 Srry if soooo Short! :( Enjoy! : )~
~Unconditional Love Chp.30~
~The Next Day, I got dressed, In a Simple Tee and Shorts, I tied my hair in a messy bun and walked to school. I grabbed my Backpack and started to head to school. I walked to Jessie, and smiled,weakly. "Bree? Have You Been getting sleep??" She asked,worridly. I shrugged, "I have a lot on my mind..I Guess..." She smiled and hugged me, tight. I sighed, Thanks Jessie..Nothing Can't Take away my Problem.. "Hey! Have You Heard about The Prom coming this Friday??" She asked. "What???!! Prom!!!!!!!!!" I exlpoded, "Yeah? This Friday! I totally idk what to wear!!!!" She squealed. I smiled, Jessie took out a Dress Magazine, "I'm going with Travis! How about You?? Which Color do you like on me? Purple? Or Light Pink??" Jessie asked. I smiled, I could tell, Jessie was trying to distract me from my Problems..."Uhhh..Cool..Travis? I'm Going just for Food and Dance..So I don't really have a date..and Light Pink is Good on You.." I said,Faking.. She squealed again, "Ohh I see, Yeah..Light Pink looks good on Me huh?" She bragged. I laughed, "Yeah.." I muttered, Walking to Class, Jessie waved and ran to her other friends. I sighed, and sat down. Bree..You Gotta concentrate.....~
~After School, I walked off to Jared's House, Ron walked up and waved, I smiled and hugged him,tight. "Jared!!" He yelled. Jared came out, wearing his usual..No shirt, and Simple Cut Shorts, "Hey Beautiful!" He yelled, Grinning Happily. I started to hug him and he stopped me, "Hey..You Havent been getting sleep lately huh?" He asked. "Don't worry about it.." I Muttered, Hugging Him. "Hey, I got it..How about you sleep over tonight?" He asked. "If Cynthia approv-" I started, Jared placed his warm finger on my lips, "Call Her." He said, Handing me a Phone. I dialed her number and called her, "hey Cyn..Is it Ok if I could stay over at jared's?" I asked. "yeah No problem, I'll drop your clothes off k? Cyah in a Few." Cynthia said. I hung up, And Nodded, "Great!" Jared smiled. A Few Minutes, Cynthia pulled on Jared's Driveway and Handed Me a Bag, "Pjs and Clothes K? Have Fun and Be Safe." She said, softly, Driving Off. I grumbled and grabbed my bag and went inside, Jared lead me to the Guest Room and we went inside, "2 Beds?? Really? Who's the Extra?" I asked. "Me..I wanna make sure you're safe.." He said,"How about you stay here for a few days? I'll drive you to school..." I rolled my eyes, "Ok..Fine, Give me the Phone.." I said. I called Cynthia again, and She dropped off my clothes again, Giving me a Kiss and leaving. I waved and walked back inside, I placed my clothes on My bed and laid and thought to myself..Richard or Jared?? Ugh!! Why do they Have to be Enemies!!! I gritted my teeth and started pounding on The Pillow, "Arghhh!!!" I yelled, Sweat coming out of my Head, Everything started to get dizzy, Jared came in and grabbed me close, and tried to calm me, "Damn You're Hot.." He said, Everything went black...~
~End of Chp.30! COMMENT!!~
~After School, I walked off to Jared's House, Ron walked up and waved, I smiled and hugged him,tight. "Jared!!" He yelled. Jared came out, wearing his usual..No shirt, and Simple Cut Shorts, "Hey Beautiful!" He yelled, Grinning Happily. I started to hug him and he stopped me, "Hey..You Havent been getting sleep lately huh?" He asked. "Don't worry about it.." I Muttered, Hugging Him. "Hey, I got it..How about you sleep over tonight?" He asked. "If Cynthia approv-" I started, Jared placed his warm finger on my lips, "Call Her." He said, Handing me a Phone. I dialed her number and called her, "hey Cyn..Is it Ok if I could stay over at jared's?" I asked. "yeah No problem, I'll drop your clothes off k? Cyah in a Few." Cynthia said. I hung up, And Nodded, "Great!" Jared smiled. A Few Minutes, Cynthia pulled on Jared's Driveway and Handed Me a Bag, "Pjs and Clothes K? Have Fun and Be Safe." She said, softly, Driving Off. I grumbled and grabbed my bag and went inside, Jared lead me to the Guest Room and we went inside, "2 Beds?? Really? Who's the Extra?" I asked. "Me..I wanna make sure you're safe.." He said,"How about you stay here for a few days? I'll drive you to school..." I rolled my eyes, "Ok..Fine, Give me the Phone.." I said. I called Cynthia again, and She dropped off my clothes again, Giving me a Kiss and leaving. I waved and walked back inside, I placed my clothes on My bed and laid and thought to myself..Richard or Jared?? Ugh!! Why do they Have to be Enemies!!! I gritted my teeth and started pounding on The Pillow, "Arghhh!!!" I yelled, Sweat coming out of my Head, Everything started to get dizzy, Jared came in and grabbed me close, and tried to calm me, "Damn You're Hot.." He said, Everything went black...~
~End of Chp.30! COMMENT!!~
Thursday, July 15, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.29~
~Richard's P.O.V~
~Stupid Jared...Doesnt Know who he's dealing with... Bree Loves me, Not That Him...I thought, "I could of Killed Him to Bits!!!!!" I yelled. Charity walked towards me, "Is Anything Wrong?" She said, sweetly, Her voice like Sweet Candy. "Could of Killed a Wolf..." I muttered. "Oh..I see...It's that Mortal?" She asked. Dang It..She read my Mind.."Yeah..Loves a Freakin Dog!!!!" I yelled. She laughed, "Fight For Her..I see You are already..Fight and Dont give Up.." She whispered in my ear, her voice like Wind chimes, She put her hands on my Back, "If I killed that Dog..I would Hurt Bree..." I said. I pictured Bree's sad face..."No...But I have too..For Her..." I said to myself. Charity smiled, "Thats Good Richard..." She whispered. "When are we fighting them?" I asked. "In 10 Days.." She said. Ugh! 10 Days!! My Teeth clenched, "I gotta kill a werewolf now!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled, angrily, releasing out of Chairty's Grasp. "I know, Richard..Tempting..isn't it?" She asked. "I know..." I said. "Don't worry...we will..Soon..." Charity whispered to my ear. I smiled..Finally...~
~Srry if Such a Short Chp! End of Chp.29! COMMENT:)~
~Stupid Jared...Doesnt Know who he's dealing with... Bree Loves me, Not That Him...I thought, "I could of Killed Him to Bits!!!!!" I yelled. Charity walked towards me, "Is Anything Wrong?" She said, sweetly, Her voice like Sweet Candy. "Could of Killed a Wolf..." I muttered. "Oh..I see...It's that Mortal?" She asked. Dang It..She read my Mind.."Yeah..Loves a Freakin Dog!!!!" I yelled. She laughed, "Fight For Her..I see You are already..Fight and Dont give Up.." She whispered in my ear, her voice like Wind chimes, She put her hands on my Back, "If I killed that Dog..I would Hurt Bree..." I said. I pictured Bree's sad face..."No...But I have too..For Her..." I said to myself. Charity smiled, "Thats Good Richard..." She whispered. "When are we fighting them?" I asked. "In 10 Days.." She said. Ugh! 10 Days!! My Teeth clenched, "I gotta kill a werewolf now!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled, angrily, releasing out of Chairty's Grasp. "I know, Richard..Tempting..isn't it?" She asked. "I know..." I said. "Don't worry...we will..Soon..." Charity whispered to my ear. I smiled..Finally...~
~Srry if Such a Short Chp! End of Chp.29! COMMENT:)~
~Unconditional Love Chp.28~
~The Next Morning, A Roar went through my Head, I got up and tied my hair into a High Ponytail, And I ran downstairs and ran outside, "Hey! Watch Your Mouth Wolf!!" Richard yelled. Oh No!! I thought,I sprinted towards the Forest, Seeing Jared and Richard, Face-To-Face.. I sighed, and ran, "Hey!! Stop Please!!" I pleaded, trying to separate the two, "You Know I'm Better than You Richard...Better Give Up before You Get Hurt.." Jared said. "You Know What? She Loves Me more than You...She Just can't admit it cause of You.." Richard said, His voice in Monotone. "Hey!! Stop! Break It Uppp!!!" I yelled, Pulling them Both Away. "Shut It, Jared..You dont know the Crap, You're talking about.." Richard yelled. "Hey! Richard!!" I yelled. "You Know Who She wants, Already..I win.." Jared said, sternly. Richard lost control and slapped Jared, He flinched and Turned into a Wolf. Jared growled, furiously. I suddenly remebered Cynthia's Story, "And-And Shot Them Both.." Cynthia's voice rang in my head, I ran towards Jared, and Held His Furry Face towards mine, "Please..Stop..." I said, softly. His dark eyes looked at me, and He stepped back. Richard smiled, "Hey! Lose the grin!" I yelled. Richard smriked and walked away towards the Forest. I hugged Jared, tight. "Wow..You're More Warmer.." I said. He roared a Laugh, "hey Let's get back..It's starting to pour hard..." I said. He started walking off, I walked alongside him. "You're such an idiot..You could've of Gotten Hurt.." I said, sternly. He rolled his black eyes, "Ugh.." I muttered.~
~End of Chp.28! COMMENT!!~
~End of Chp.28! COMMENT!!~
~Unconditional Love Chp.27~
~ I Stayed home, the Next Day.. Staring at my Window.. Listening to the Rain Pour Hard on my Window.. I got dressed in an Laced Undershirt And Shorts, I tied my hair into a Half Ponytail and Walked Downstairs, "Hey Cynthia!" I yelled. "Bree? How late did you sleep? It's 12:00!!!" Cynthia yelled. I shrugged and sat down, Cynthia placed, Bread and Butter at the Table, "Hey Cynthia.... Did You Ever Had to Make a Hard Decision?" I asked. "Like What?" She questioned. "Uhh.. I dunno.. Like Two Boys you really Love and They Hate Each other but Want You.. And You just Can't Decide?" I said. Cynthia chuckled, "Yeahh.. I have been in that situation..why? Is it Jared?" She asked. "And..And... Richard..." I sputted. "Richard? Who's That??" She asked. "A-A-A Darkling... I met.." I said, slowly. "Oh my Gosh Bree!!!!!" She yelled, slapping my head, "Back to the Situtation.. In my Senior Year.... I had a HUGE Drinking Problem!!!" She yelled. I was shocked, "I never Knew You Drank??" I yelled. "Only at School.. I kept it Secret from Youu.." She said. "Well.. I was in love with Carl, A Musical Talented Boy.... But then there Was Junior, A Hot Football, Acholic, Like Me.." She said, Her Face, Like Stone.. "Well.. I was currently dating Carl then Junior came up and I dated Them Both.." She chuckled, "At my 17th Birthday.. I was At the Bar... For my Birthday.. And they Both came and Got into a Really Big Fight...The Police Came By.. And one of the Girls told the Police, The Wrong Story... The Police Ca-Came Out... And Shot them Both......" Cynthia said, Choking with Tears, "I never Got to Choose... But if I did.. Carl would be the One....." She said, Choking into Uncontrollable Tears, I hugged Cynthia, Tight. "Bree, Be Careful of What you Choose... If you choose Richard.. Make Sure He doesn't Hurt you... And Jared... I would probably Have to Cook for All of His Brothers.. But What Makes You Happy.. Makes Me Happy..." She said, softly. I hugged her tight and started to cry onto her shoulder...Who Makes Me Happy?~
~End Of Chp.27!!! COMMENT!!!~
~End Of Chp.27!!! COMMENT!!!~
Wednesday, July 14, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.26~
~I banged on Jared's Door, Finally the Door Opened, And Jared appeared, "What's Going?" he asked. I jumped up and hugged him tight. He hugged me back and we walked inside, "What Up Bree?" Ron asked. I laughed, "Poker?" I asked. Ron chuckled and laid his cards, And Gave me a Hug. "P-P-Poker face.." Jon joked. We all laughed along to his joke. Jared grabbed my hand, "I gotta talk to you.." He whispered. I nodded and we went outside in the Rain, His hand was so warm..."Bree...I know You're in love with me..." He said, slowly. "Uh-Uh..You Know I'm in Love with Someone else too..." I said. He stiffened, "Yeah.." He said, Tense in his voice, "Not as Much as I am in you.." Jared said. He grabbed my hand and laid it aganist his chest..His warm, Hard..Chest..."Feel My Heart...This is how I feel about You..." He muttered. I closed my eyes, Felt the Beat of His warm heart.. It was soft, fluttery, Like a Butterfly, wanting to break free. I opened my eyes, His eyes staring at mine, His warm lips touched mine, His warm lips moved everywhere on mine, I moved along, slowly..Feeling like a Cheater...I wrapped my arms around him, He wrapped his broad arms around my waist, One hand, tangled in My Soaking Hair..I love both boys...Richard and jared....I couldnt choose..I leaned in closer, Touching his Black wet hair, I let go, and whispered, "I-I Love Both of You.." I said, Slowly. He came closer to me, "I'm better than Him..Bree..You Know That.." He said,sternly but convincing. "I gotta go.." He said. He left me in the soaking rain, before he left, He kissed my head and left. I walked out and returned to my house, thinking about the hard decision to make...~
~End Of Chp.26! COMMENT! Hope You Guys Liked it! :)~
~End Of Chp.26! COMMENT! Hope You Guys Liked it! :)~
~Unconditional Love Chp.25~
~I walked back home and sat near my window pane. I sighed, "Why Is Everyone is Fights??" I said to myself. "Psss! Bree! It's Richard!!" Richard whispered, "What are you doing here??" I yelled. "Come Down!!" he yelled. Luckily Cynthia wasnt home, I walked downstairs and hugged Richard, "hey I need to talk to you.." He said. We walked off, We sat down, and Richard stared at me, "I know..You want me..." He said, his voice,sincere. I gulped, "I-I-Don't Know yett.." I stammered. "I know You Love Both Me and Him.." He said, His Voice cracked when he pronouced, "Him" "I know.." I responded. He came closer, and closer, His Lips crushed into mine, He moved fast, My Mind went blank....I kissed back, Moving with his fast pace, My Mind raced, Suddenly jared came into my mind and released. He looked at me, sternly. "I-I have to go.." I said. The Sky was Dark with Clouds, It's going to rain.. and I need to see jared..Richard nodded and took me home, Then again, he kissed me, Only Lightly. I smiled,weakly and walked inside and changed. Then I went to jared's House...~
~End of Chp.25! COMMENT!!~
~End of Chp.25! COMMENT!!~
Tuesday, July 13, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.24~
~I cried, and cried.. And Continued Reading Jared's Note, Flashbacks of Last Nght Appeared in my Head, I did all those until the next morning, I got up and changed into Sweats and a T-Shirt, and Tied My Messy hair into a Bun, I walked downstairs, Hearing the DoorBell Ring. I quickly ran downstairs, and opened the door, "Ja-Jared!!!" I yelled. I jumped up and hugged him tight, Tears streaming from my eyes. "I-I-Missed You!!" I yelled.He smiled and hugged me tight, "Cynthia is sleeping.." I whispered. "hey..I'm Sorry about everything..." He muttered. "It's Ok.." I said. "Haha, Ron Misses You.." He said, Laughing. I laughed along, "Aw.. I missed Everyone!" I yelled. We arrived at jared's House and Ron and the Group greeted us, "Brree!! We missed You!! But jared missed you SOOO Much! He was all like, Should I call Bree? No wait She's Probably Mad!!!" Ron joked. "yeah! Next he went, I wonder How is She and Her darkling Boy??" Another imitated. "Hahaha, How's My Note? Is it Too Dumb?" Ron said. I started laughing. "hahahhaha, Shut it." jared said, sternly. Avery came out and Gave me, an Icy Glare, "UGH! Get out of My Life!!!" She yelled, Running Off. "Wow..Shes ticked about last night.." Ron said. Jared nodded, We went inside, "Jeez? Are You Guys Like Remodeling?" I asked. Jared's Mom came by and dropped by a basket of muffins, "Nope..Our Relatives are coming.." She said. "Why?" I asked. "Becuase..The darklings wants to fight aganist us.." Jared muttered. "What?? Why?" I asked. "We Had to accept it Bree. We Have to Protect You and Everyone.." Jared said. Hot Tears came down my Eyes, "NOO!! NOO!!" I started yelling, Jared grabbed me and held me close to His Warm Chest. I started crying for Jared's Family and Jared..and Richard.......~
~End of Chp.24! Srry if Suckish! :( Thanks for Reading! Chp.25 is Next!~
~End of Chp.24! Srry if Suckish! :( Thanks for Reading! Chp.25 is Next!~
~Unconditional Love Chp.23~
~Bree's P.O.V~
"Bree? Bree? Earth To Bree?" Jessie asked. She waved her hands in front of me, I was too concentrated in Jared's Letter, Which is currently in my Pocket. "Huh?" I said, waking up. "Jonathon wants to talk to You.." Jessie said, Jonathon walked up to me, Jessie walked up and left. "Hey..Sorry about Two weeks ago.." He said, sweetly. "Uh-Uh It's Nothing..Jared was being a Jerk.." I said. He smiled, "Hey..Wanna Go to the Movies Tonight?" He asked. "Uh..Surre? What Movie?" I asked. "I was thinking.....Despicable Me Looks good.. How's That?" He asked. "I saw that already...Day and Night?" I asked. He was shocked at my choice, "Sure, I always wanted to see that movie, 9:00 K? Cyah There.." Jonathon said, flipping his hair and walked away. I sighed and took out jared's Note, Wet tear stains cover it, Cause of My Major Breakdown last night. I sighed and kept reading the Note Over and Over until The Lunch Bell rang.. I got up, Stuffed the Note into My Pocket, "Will Miss You A Ton.." ~
~ I got ready for Jonathon and I's Movie Night. I dressed myself in a simple Plaid Shirt and Skinny jeans, I tied my Hair in two braids and ran downstairs, "Cyah Cynthia! I'm Heading to The Movies with Jonathon!" I yelled. She waved and I ran out of the Door, I drove to the Nearby Movies, and got off. "Hey" Jonathon greeted me. I smiled, and He showed me the Tickets.."Great You Went On Movie Ticket.com?" I asked. He laughed, "Yeah..Let's Go..Need Popcorn?" He asked. "Nah. Soda.." I said. He smiled and happily bought me a cup of soda. We went into the Movies, and watched the movie..Surpirslying this Movie is boring, I needed a Little Fresh Air, "Hey, I need some air k?" I whispered. Jonathon nodded, even though it seem he was too interested in the movie, I shrugged, and Got Up. I went out of the Theatre and Sat down. I got up and walked back to the theatre, There I saw...Jared! "Ja-Jared??" I asked. He turned around, Sure enough It Was Jared, "Hey Bree." He said,coldly. "Hey, What's with Dont Call me? Huh? I dont have time for You? And You have time for Movies??" I asked, Angirly. "You Should Leave.." He said, his voice, Suddenly Stern. "What? Leave? No! I am not!!" I exploded. Avery stepped out, "What's Going? What's She doing Here?" Avery asked, sternly. "She's doing nothing..Let's Go.." Jared said,sternly. I walked closer, "Hey,Where do you think you're going?!!" I asked. Avery turned and pushed me hard onto the ground. "Ouch! jeez!" I yelled. Jared Helped me up and whispered, "Go." I nodded, Tears streaming from my eyes, I walked back to the Theatre, and sat next to Jonathon, "You Missed the Whole Movie! hey what happened to you??" He asked. "No-Nothing..Hurt My hand..Thanks Jonathon..Cyah Later.." I said, Leaving and Drove Home. I ran upstairs and changed into my Pjs and started crying.~
~End of Chp.23! Hope You Guys Liked it! :)~
"Bree? Bree? Earth To Bree?" Jessie asked. She waved her hands in front of me, I was too concentrated in Jared's Letter, Which is currently in my Pocket. "Huh?" I said, waking up. "Jonathon wants to talk to You.." Jessie said, Jonathon walked up to me, Jessie walked up and left. "Hey..Sorry about Two weeks ago.." He said, sweetly. "Uh-Uh It's Nothing..Jared was being a Jerk.." I said. He smiled, "Hey..Wanna Go to the Movies Tonight?" He asked. "Uh..Surre? What Movie?" I asked. "I was thinking.....Despicable Me Looks good.. How's That?" He asked. "I saw that already...Day and Night?" I asked. He was shocked at my choice, "Sure, I always wanted to see that movie, 9:00 K? Cyah There.." Jonathon said, flipping his hair and walked away. I sighed and took out jared's Note, Wet tear stains cover it, Cause of My Major Breakdown last night. I sighed and kept reading the Note Over and Over until The Lunch Bell rang.. I got up, Stuffed the Note into My Pocket, "Will Miss You A Ton.." ~
~ I got ready for Jonathon and I's Movie Night. I dressed myself in a simple Plaid Shirt and Skinny jeans, I tied my Hair in two braids and ran downstairs, "Cyah Cynthia! I'm Heading to The Movies with Jonathon!" I yelled. She waved and I ran out of the Door, I drove to the Nearby Movies, and got off. "Hey" Jonathon greeted me. I smiled, and He showed me the Tickets.."Great You Went On Movie Ticket.com?" I asked. He laughed, "Yeah..Let's Go..Need Popcorn?" He asked. "Nah. Soda.." I said. He smiled and happily bought me a cup of soda. We went into the Movies, and watched the movie..Surpirslying this Movie is boring, I needed a Little Fresh Air, "Hey, I need some air k?" I whispered. Jonathon nodded, even though it seem he was too interested in the movie, I shrugged, and Got Up. I went out of the Theatre and Sat down. I got up and walked back to the theatre, There I saw...Jared! "Ja-Jared??" I asked. He turned around, Sure enough It Was Jared, "Hey Bree." He said,coldly. "Hey, What's with Dont Call me? Huh? I dont have time for You? And You have time for Movies??" I asked, Angirly. "You Should Leave.." He said, his voice, Suddenly Stern. "What? Leave? No! I am not!!" I exploded. Avery stepped out, "What's Going? What's She doing Here?" Avery asked, sternly. "She's doing nothing..Let's Go.." Jared said,sternly. I walked closer, "Hey,Where do you think you're going?!!" I asked. Avery turned and pushed me hard onto the ground. "Ouch! jeez!" I yelled. Jared Helped me up and whispered, "Go." I nodded, Tears streaming from my eyes, I walked back to the Theatre, and sat next to Jonathon, "You Missed the Whole Movie! hey what happened to you??" He asked. "No-Nothing..Hurt My hand..Thanks Jonathon..Cyah Later.." I said, Leaving and Drove Home. I ran upstairs and changed into my Pjs and started crying.~
~End of Chp.23! Hope You Guys Liked it! :)~
~Unconditional Love Chp.22~
~Richard's P.O.V~
~I went back to The Darklings, Reporting Back to Mistress Zega. "Good job, Richard..How Is Your Mortal?" She asked. My Teeth gritted, "I'm Getting Her.." I said. "Great, Once You Have Her..Reveal the Secrets about the Wolf Pack..." She ordered. I gulped, "Do I-I Have to?" I asked, Nervously. Mistress Zega burst into Laughter. Carrie Laughed, Suddenly Again, Pain went through my Head, "Hahahaha, Are You Going to Do What Mistress Zega ordered?" Carrie asked, sternly. "Ye-ss-Yess!" I yelled. Soon the Pain was released from my Body. "Good Boy.." She said. "Thank You Carrie." Mistress Zega thanked. Carrie smiled and left. I sighed and walked away.~
~Srry If Such a Short Chp!:( Thanks for Reading! COMMENT!!~
~I went back to The Darklings, Reporting Back to Mistress Zega. "Good job, Richard..How Is Your Mortal?" She asked. My Teeth gritted, "I'm Getting Her.." I said. "Great, Once You Have Her..Reveal the Secrets about the Wolf Pack..." She ordered. I gulped, "Do I-I Have to?" I asked, Nervously. Mistress Zega burst into Laughter. Carrie Laughed, Suddenly Again, Pain went through my Head, "Hahahaha, Are You Going to Do What Mistress Zega ordered?" Carrie asked, sternly. "Ye-ss-Yess!" I yelled. Soon the Pain was released from my Body. "Good Boy.." She said. "Thank You Carrie." Mistress Zega thanked. Carrie smiled and left. I sighed and walked away.~
~Srry If Such a Short Chp!:( Thanks for Reading! COMMENT!!~
Monday, July 12, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.21~
~"Ahhh! There's a Darkling In the Territory!!" A woman yelled. Everyone shot right out of their seats, I quickly ran out the Yard, And Saw Richard Standing in front of the Door, "Hey! What are you doing?" I yelled. I ran up to Richard and Tried Pushing Him. But He stood there still, As Jared walked up to Him, "Hey, What's Going on Darkrai?" He asked, Sternly. "Hey Tell Your People to Back Off, We're watching all of You.. " Richard said, "Hey, Go!" I yelled, I pushed Richard, "Ok.. Tell Your Mistress, We'll be waiting!" Jared yelled. I pushed Richard off, "Go! Just Go!" I yelled. Jared looked at me, Sternly. My Throat swelled, Everyone walked away, And I walked off with Richard, "Hey.. You Party Pooper.." I said, Slapping Him. "So You Decided?" He asked. "NO!!!" I yelled. I ran back home again, and Closed my Door. I went upstairs and Fell Asleep.~
~"Jared Thompson, Please Leave a Message..Beep!" "Hey Jared, Sorry about Last Night.. I was Such a Jerk.. Please Answer..." I said Leaving a message. I sighed.. That Was the Fifth Phone Call This Week. I walked outside their House, There I saw a Reddish, Brownish Wolf and A White One.. "Jared?" I called, Running Up to the Wolves, The Red one looked at me and turned away. I accidentally fell into a Deep Hole, "Jared!!" I cried. The Wolves turned and Left. I got up and Ran Back Home, There I showered and Looked outside, "I messed everyone Up.." I muttered. Cynthia came in, "Hey It's a Note for a You.." Cynthia said, Handing me an envelope, I smiled, weakly And opened it... It's From Jared.. It Read.
"Hey Bree, Don't Call Me Anymore.. Too Busy.. Too Busy to Be Around You.. Have Fun with Your Darkling.. Your Better Off with Him Anway..
Will Miss You a Ton. Doesn't Change Anything Bye.-Jared"
I crumpled the paper and stuffed it in my Pocket, And Started to Cry Again.. It's Over...~
~End Of Chp.21! COMMENT! Hope You all liked it! :) Chp.22 is Next!~
~"Jared Thompson, Please Leave a Message..Beep!" "Hey Jared, Sorry about Last Night.. I was Such a Jerk.. Please Answer..." I said Leaving a message. I sighed.. That Was the Fifth Phone Call This Week. I walked outside their House, There I saw a Reddish, Brownish Wolf and A White One.. "Jared?" I called, Running Up to the Wolves, The Red one looked at me and turned away. I accidentally fell into a Deep Hole, "Jared!!" I cried. The Wolves turned and Left. I got up and Ran Back Home, There I showered and Looked outside, "I messed everyone Up.." I muttered. Cynthia came in, "Hey It's a Note for a You.." Cynthia said, Handing me an envelope, I smiled, weakly And opened it... It's From Jared.. It Read.
"Hey Bree, Don't Call Me Anymore.. Too Busy.. Too Busy to Be Around You.. Have Fun with Your Darkling.. Your Better Off with Him Anway..
Will Miss You a Ton. Doesn't Change Anything Bye.-Jared"
I crumpled the paper and stuffed it in my Pocket, And Started to Cry Again.. It's Over...~
~End Of Chp.21! COMMENT! Hope You all liked it! :) Chp.22 is Next!~
~Unconditional Love Chp.20~
~I ran back to Home, Cried on my pillow. "Choose Me or Jared?" Richard's Voice rang in my Head, "Ugh!! Why??!! Why?? Me!!!!" I yelled, to myself. I punched my Pillow, "Arghh!! Decisions!! Who Made those Things Up???!!" I continued yelling, Throwing My Pillow around the Room. Cynthia ran up and knocked my door, "Bree? You Ok?" She asked, Her Voice full of Concern. "Uh-Uh I'm Good, Oh That Darn Pillow.." I said, As Soon as I heard Cynthia leave, I threw my Pillow again. "Ugh!!!!! Why? Me!! Stuck in a Love Triangle!!!!!!!!" I yelled. A Rock flew from my Window, "Hey Bree! What's Wrong!??" Jared asked. "Uh-Uh Nothing." I said, Wiping my Eyes. "Ok, Hey You're invited to a Werewolf Camp Meeting!" He exclaimed. I faked a smile, "Great!" He jumped onto my Bedroom, He looked at all the feathers from the pillow. "Woww..Did You Have a sleep over or something?" He asked. I laughed, "My Pillow Broke..Whoops!" I exclaimed, I got on his Back and We jumped off, "Ok, I think I could Walk Now.."I said. He let me go and We started walking towards his house, Soon we arrived and went to the Backyard, Where a Campfire was spotted. "I-I Don't Think I was invited.." I stammered, While Backing away. He grinned and Grabbed me. Avery looked at me, In Envy..We sat down next to Jared's Mom, And Listened, "Welcome, We have Arranged this Meeting..Because..A Severe Killing Spree is going on, Darklings Everywhere! Killing Thousands!!" The Leader roared. I scooted closer to Jared, He smiled, "I wont let one near You.." He whispered to my ear..I shuddered at the Thought...One already came near me...~
~End of Chp.20! COMMENT!~
~End of Chp.20! COMMENT!~
~"Unconditional Love Chp.19~
~"Whew! That was such a Loongg Day.. Huh Bree?" Cynthia complained, While picking up trash, I sighed, And Helped Cynthia, Soon We finished, I walked upstairs, and Grabbed all of my Gifts. Jesse Gave me a Teddy Bear, Lola Gave Me a Perfume, Jenny gave me, 100 Dollar Giftcard for Target.. I smiled and grabbed Jared's Gift, "It's so Pretty..." I whispered, I started crying again, Thump! Something Hit my Window Pane, I looked down, "Bree? What's Wrong? I'll come up.." Jared said, He climbed up onto my bedroom, "Hey I'm Here, What's Wrong?" He asked. I collapsed onto Jared, "Hey It's Ok.." He said, Softly. "Sorry, It's Your Gift, I-I-I Love It.." I stammered. "Hey Glad You like it.." He said, Hugging Me Tight, "Why Are You Always Warm?" I asked. "It's Part of the Super Animal.." He said. I smiled, "You Better Get Going, Cynthia will Call the Police if She sees You.." I said. He laughed and jumped off, "Ok, Goodnight Bree!" He said and ran off. I put away Jared's present and Got Dressed in Regular Clothes and Fell Asleep.~
~The Next Morning, I got and Secretly walked outside, There was Richard waiting, "Ok Ready For the Day!" He exclaimed, I smiled, and we started walking towards the Golden Gate Bridge, "Mmm.. You Smell Good.. You're wearing the perfume I gave you?" He asked. I laughed, "Yeah.." "Who Gave that Necklace? It Matches Your Eyes..." Richard said. "Uh-Uh.. Jared..." I said. His smile suddenly vanished, "It's Time For You to Know.." He said, sternly. "I'm Better than Jared.. Bree.." He said, coming closer.. "I-I.. Don't Know Yet...." I stammered. "Choose Bree, Me or Him?" He asked, Sternly. He came closer and Kissed me, I started squirming and Let go, I ran off, Away from Richard. Tears streaming down from my eyes...~
~End of Chp.19! Srry if Suckish!~
~The Next Morning, I got and Secretly walked outside, There was Richard waiting, "Ok Ready For the Day!" He exclaimed, I smiled, and we started walking towards the Golden Gate Bridge, "Mmm.. You Smell Good.. You're wearing the perfume I gave you?" He asked. I laughed, "Yeah.." "Who Gave that Necklace? It Matches Your Eyes..." Richard said. "Uh-Uh.. Jared..." I said. His smile suddenly vanished, "It's Time For You to Know.." He said, sternly. "I'm Better than Jared.. Bree.." He said, coming closer.. "I-I.. Don't Know Yet...." I stammered. "Choose Bree, Me or Him?" He asked, Sternly. He came closer and Kissed me, I started squirming and Let go, I ran off, Away from Richard. Tears streaming down from my eyes...~
~End of Chp.19! Srry if Suckish!~
Sunday, July 11, 2010
~Unconditional Love Chp.18~
~Bree's P.O.V~
~"Bree! You Have to Look Nice!" Cynthia said, Grabbing pieces of My hair, "Ugh..What Are You Going to Do?" I asked. "Curls!!!" Cynthia squealed, She grabbed A Currling Iron, and Curled every piece, Next She put fondation,Lipstick, Mascra,eyeline, and Tons of make-up, I looked at myself in the mirror, "Breeanna Evans! You Look Absolutely Beautiful!!!" Cynthia squealed. I got up and turned, "Whats my Gift?" I asked. Cynthia looked at me and pulled out a Blackish Dress, It had simple White Polka Dots, and had a Long White Sash, I gasped, "What?" Cynthia asked, panickally. "I-I-Love It!!" I yelled. I hugged Cynthia tight, "Happy Birthday Bree, Happy Birthday!" She said,Crying Tears of Joy. I got dressed and Helped Cynthia set up the Tables and Food, "Look, Jessie's here!" Cynthia said. "Cool!" I ran and opened the Door, There She was, Holding a Small Bag, "Happy Birthday Bree!" She said and Hugged Me, I placed the Bag on the Table, Soon, Kids from My School Came By and Greeted Me Happy Birthday, I looked at the Clock, anxiously waiting for Richard..and Jared..Jared's family came in and All Hugged me tight. Avery gave me a cool glare, "Happy Bir-thday.." She muttered and Walked away. I walked up to Jared, He was shirtless.."Hey Beautiful!" He said, Hugging me. "My Birthday Present wasnt You Shirtless was it?" I asked. He chuckled, "No, It's Something Better.." He said. He grabbed my Hand and Placed a Small Velevt Box.."Picked it Out Myself.." He said. I opened the Box, carefully..In it was a Pretty Diamond Necklace, My Heart Swelled. "Aww.Ja-jared..It's Beautiful.." I choked. He smiled, and Hugged Me tight. "Happy Birthday Bree.." He said, softly. I cried on his shoulder, "I-I'm Sorry about me being a Baby.." I said. "No It's Ok.." He said. I continued crying on his shoulder. I peeked out and saw Richard standing near my driveway, Looking at me, I smiled, and Mouthed, Go to The Backyard.. he nodded and Went Away. I smiled and Let Go, "Go Get Something to eat..Or else Your Brothers will eat them all." I said, Joking. "Hahhhaa..Cynthia's Cooking That Good?" he asked. I nodded, He smiled and walked inside. I walked out to the backyard, "Hey Birthday Girl!" Richard said, he hugged me tight. "Hey Richard.." I said. He handed me a Bag, "Hope You Like It.." he said, I opened the bag, "Bath Scrub and Lotion! Aw gee Richard! I really need these!!" I said. He laughed, "I didnt Know what You wanted So Got You that.." He said. I laughed, "So I really Smell To You?" I asked. He laughed, "Nahh.." He said, He hugged me tight again. "Hey I was wonderring...Meet Me at The Golden Gate Bridge, Friend Night Out.." He said, nervously. "Huh! Of Course! tomorrow?" I asked. "yeah Sure! Cyah Later Bree! Better Go Or I'll get Caught! Have Fun!" he said, Disappearing. I sighed and walked back inside and passed by Avery, "Uhh..Hey Avery.." I nervously said. She scoffed and ran out and turned into a wolf, I shrugged and walked towards jared, "jared..I need to Speak to You.." I whispered, "Huh?" He asked, His Mouth filled with Food,I grabbed his arm and pulled him away. We went outside, "Hey, What's Going with Avery? She hates me more than ever..." I asked. "I dont Know..Shes always like that Bree..Don't worry about it..." he said. "Uhhh..I just want to be like friends not enemies.." I said.He pulled me close, "Just Have Fun On Your Birthday.." He whispered into my ear...~
~End of Chp.18 COMMENT!!!~
~"Bree! You Have to Look Nice!" Cynthia said, Grabbing pieces of My hair, "Ugh..What Are You Going to Do?" I asked. "Curls!!!" Cynthia squealed, She grabbed A Currling Iron, and Curled every piece, Next She put fondation,Lipstick, Mascra,eyeline, and Tons of make-up, I looked at myself in the mirror, "Breeanna Evans! You Look Absolutely Beautiful!!!" Cynthia squealed. I got up and turned, "Whats my Gift?" I asked. Cynthia looked at me and pulled out a Blackish Dress, It had simple White Polka Dots, and had a Long White Sash, I gasped, "What?" Cynthia asked, panickally. "I-I-Love It!!" I yelled. I hugged Cynthia tight, "Happy Birthday Bree, Happy Birthday!" She said,Crying Tears of Joy. I got dressed and Helped Cynthia set up the Tables and Food, "Look, Jessie's here!" Cynthia said. "Cool!" I ran and opened the Door, There She was, Holding a Small Bag, "Happy Birthday Bree!" She said and Hugged Me, I placed the Bag on the Table, Soon, Kids from My School Came By and Greeted Me Happy Birthday, I looked at the Clock, anxiously waiting for Richard..and Jared..Jared's family came in and All Hugged me tight. Avery gave me a cool glare, "Happy Bir-thday.." She muttered and Walked away. I walked up to Jared, He was shirtless.."Hey Beautiful!" He said, Hugging me. "My Birthday Present wasnt You Shirtless was it?" I asked. He chuckled, "No, It's Something Better.." He said. He grabbed my Hand and Placed a Small Velevt Box.."Picked it Out Myself.." He said. I opened the Box, carefully..In it was a Pretty Diamond Necklace, My Heart Swelled. "Aww.Ja-jared..It's Beautiful.." I choked. He smiled, and Hugged Me tight. "Happy Birthday Bree.." He said, softly. I cried on his shoulder, "I-I'm Sorry about me being a Baby.." I said. "No It's Ok.." He said. I continued crying on his shoulder. I peeked out and saw Richard standing near my driveway, Looking at me, I smiled, and Mouthed, Go to The Backyard.. he nodded and Went Away. I smiled and Let Go, "Go Get Something to eat..Or else Your Brothers will eat them all." I said, Joking. "Hahhhaa..Cynthia's Cooking That Good?" he asked. I nodded, He smiled and walked inside. I walked out to the backyard, "Hey Birthday Girl!" Richard said, he hugged me tight. "Hey Richard.." I said. He handed me a Bag, "Hope You Like It.." he said, I opened the bag, "Bath Scrub and Lotion! Aw gee Richard! I really need these!!" I said. He laughed, "I didnt Know what You wanted So Got You that.." He said. I laughed, "So I really Smell To You?" I asked. He laughed, "Nahh.." He said, He hugged me tight again. "Hey I was wonderring...Meet Me at The Golden Gate Bridge, Friend Night Out.." He said, nervously. "Huh! Of Course! tomorrow?" I asked. "yeah Sure! Cyah Later Bree! Better Go Or I'll get Caught! Have Fun!" he said, Disappearing. I sighed and walked back inside and passed by Avery, "Uhh..Hey Avery.." I nervously said. She scoffed and ran out and turned into a wolf, I shrugged and walked towards jared, "jared..I need to Speak to You.." I whispered, "Huh?" He asked, His Mouth filled with Food,I grabbed his arm and pulled him away. We went outside, "Hey, What's Going with Avery? She hates me more than ever..." I asked. "I dont Know..Shes always like that Bree..Don't worry about it..." he said. "Uhhh..I just want to be like friends not enemies.." I said.He pulled me close, "Just Have Fun On Your Birthday.." He whispered into my ear...~
~End of Chp.18 COMMENT!!!~
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)





